RW DE1: Jack Hallows vs mal diction (OPEN 4 VOTES)

[Bag Mandela]

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DOUBLE ELIMINATION RD 1
Bars due Sunday 16th Feb
Public voting Wednesday 19th Feb
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Overall public vote = 1 vote
MV’s vote = 1 vote
Bags vote = 1 vote
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@Jack Hallows @mal diction

[Jack Hallows]

check. going 12. best of bars to the homie Mal.

[Jack Hallows]

in this tournament you’ve reached a foul barrier, i’m wild scarier
type’a nigga that’ll toss a teddy bear stuffed w/ a pipe bomb in ya child carrier
& i’ll leave no one around to bury ya…
… when i unleash droves of diseased prone mosquitos in Malaria
homes etched a flow called “Let Me Go” after his break up was done
… ironic cuz that^ quote is what he always hears ‘fore women taze him & run
my reign has begun. i’ll claim the victim when laced crack cures a diction
… then i’ll just take “Malfeasance” i committed that same act against him
his brain has a schism. this freakish nutter spreads peanut butter in his ball crease
then prods his small dog to eat it all off.. he calls this The Maltese
aw hayell nawl, chief. i’m done w/ patience, get serviced w/ guns ablazin
one BLA-KOW will get rid of Mal Diction like a perfect enunciation
Howl at me…

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reference guide:
1) Malaria / Mal area
2) he made a song called “Let Me Go” for the audio competition portion of the tourney
3) malfeasance / Mal fee since.. malfeasance is a great wrong committed against another. so i’m taking his money after committing an injustice against him.
4) Maltese / Mal tease - maltese is a breed of small dog.
5) Mal Diction literally means “bad” (mal) “grammar”(diction), whether in written or spoken form, hence a perfect enunciation being what can put an end to mal diction. in this case, the perfect enunciation is me imitating the sound of the gun i’m shooting.

[mal diction]

i bet i'll beat jack like chronic masturbators
and the site'll give him the boot like Louisiana natives
I’ll merk you. Think your wife's with you, we aint believing your match
Cus she's a good-bi and look guy.. I aint speaking leaving or cash
So go head, ring the alarm and run for cover homie, i’m nice
mal is polished, I drop ish and make rappers go P! Like Sean Price
so make no mistake... mal diction is the great.. i hate to brag
i state how i feel and Arizona and shoot you up like that state flag
there's no doubt what i'm about is mountains above your sight
through the ground i'll beat you down and have ya loving the night
my words are true, you cant deny my skill there aint no stalling
i'm speaking facts, you cant see me Jack, this hills for falling

[Bag Mandela]

in this tournament you’ve reached a foul barrier, i’m wild scarier
type’a nigga that’ll toss a teddy bear stuffed w/ a pipe bomb in ya child carrier Damn
& i’ll leave no one around to bury ya…
… when i unleash droves of diseased prone mosquitos in Malaria
homes etched a flow called “Let Me Go” after his break up was done
… ironic cuz that^ quote is what he always hears ‘fore women taze him & run Lol this was dope
my reign has begun. i’ll claim the victim when laced crack cures a diction
… then i’ll just take “Malfeasance” i committed that same act against him Set up & punch both nice here, props
his brain has a schism. this freakish nutter spreads peanut butter in his ball crease
then prods his small dog to eat it all off.. he calls this The Maltese lol that's fucked up
aw hayell nawl, chief. i’m done w/ patience, get serviced w/ guns ablazin
one BLA-KOW will get rid of Mal Diction like a perfect enunciation dope, could've maybe worked in a 3rd "blackout" layer to this but it did everything it needed to still, nice verse
Howl at me… howl

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i bet i'll beat jack like chronic masturbators
and the site'll give him the boot like Louisiana natives wtf? this is like a different mal, i fuck with it tho, let's go
I’ll merk you. Think your wife's with you, we aint believing your match
Cus she's a good-bi and look guy.. I aint speaking leaving or cash
So go head, ring the alarm and run for cover homie, i’m nice
mal is polished, I drop ish and make rappers go P! Like Sean Price decent
so make no mistake... mal diction is the great.. i hate to brag
i state how i feel and Arizona and shoot you up like that state flag
there's no doubt what i'm about is mountains above your sight
through the ground i'll beat you down and have ya loving the night ||
my words are true, you cant deny my skill there aint no stalling
i'm speaking facts, you cant see me Jack, this hills for falling Deffo stepped it up for this battle

This is the best I've seen mal drop so far in the tourney, so salute for that. Jack had a little more filler in than usual but the non-filler was just a level up from mal's wordplay, the malfeasance & let me go bars were the best 2 of the battle for me so I got Jack with the W on this one.

Vote Jack Hallows

[Slayerr.]

Damn both brought fire here

Jacks first two bars were slick, the way the rhyme scheme followed through first was an alright punch then the second was dope. I feel like the flip on your third bar didn’t work too well however I must admit I’ve never heard that word before which has possibly tripped me up. Maltese doesn’t work looks good in text but doesn’t sound alike, unless it’s an accent thing but Maltese is like mole and male ears like how. Closer was executed cleanly. Dope verse howl

Mal I like the opener, nice flip and jab in the first few words then a nice punchline to round the bar off. I liked good bi flip nice I think your next two bars fells off slightly and closer was a good concept but wasn’t executed maybe as harshly as it could’ve been

This battle was lit and I enjoyed both, both brought your A game I feel like it could be a close battle jack had the celever lines but also missed a couple trying to do so imo, if mal had remained consistent he might’ve taken this but he fell off a couple of lines too
V/jack