Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@EXalted @MUSIC TEACHER
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@EXalted @MUSIC TEACHER
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@Exalted. @MUSIC TEACHER
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ur whole vibe is a gay tone, while im dialed in like a payphone/ Exalted? U couldnt get high preys hittin 2 birds with the same stone
You die young
ur bell rung w shots. paint ur body like beautiful art
If u get to a New Age, Music...im sending u where they play flutes an a harp
First one doesn’t makes sense, second one doesn’t either but it’s closer to it.
Vote exalted
nice battle
. high preys/praise was cool. but I have exalted taking this one. i thought his wording was more polished.
v/Exalted
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both had solid punches to me, I think the deciding factor here was the set ups for me....thought Exalted had a better set up by a long shot.
V- Exalted
CΛVEMENAxe
Exalted's set up, "your bell rung with shots" tied in with the punch & then you painted his body which dipped out of the musical theme but stayed in line with the homicidal aspect - might've been a link to new age music but I'm not sure. The punch itself was cool, lacked a bit of sting but otherwise alright.
I liked the way Music built up to the punch, it made no attempt to tie in with the punch but had a brash & ignorant character about it which I think nullifies the need for it to do so when executed in the right way. The punch was decent too.
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Like both but Music’s bar was fire and wittier. Props to both
so I didn't like how Exalted is painting music like one of french girls .. music was pretty solid here i actually dig the concept and double entendre. exalted could have taken this too but I feel his execution is a little off.. cool concept too though
v. music teacher
I actually like both
Even if they have to be grammatically stretched to work both ways
Close enough
Tough call here. But Ex had the better setup
Exalted wins
4-3 need more votes
Truth be told I can go back and forth on this so I’m going with my initial impression. Solid battle here.
V/ Exalted. Whoever Music is had a good bar too, but the setup didn’t have the same connection his did. My challenge is Music’s actual punchline connected harder, but the setup and hit was better executed by exalted and the punch was still good as well. So I have to go Exalted
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