Aye BRUH vs Killing Spree[Aye BRUH wins]

[Aye BRUH]

10 lines..House Rules..Due Tuesday

[Aye BRUH]

Been browsing around and...

You get eaten by the gators in LLL, cant even defeat his peers
Makes sense that his wack ass runs the FL better than William Grier
This dude aint the best, the blade'll put em to rest
I'll put 1 across his throat w/o hinting for a signal of death
Im a hero to ya dumb hoe, when i fuck her she knows its deep
My dick'll launch that 'bat in the sky' till all the villains clear the streets
It was a mistake giving me time, my writings known to win
i'd Bash you with a key up but we know how that story ends
Your not a ladies man, just a creep thats always flexin
He's only a 'panty dropper' when he's caught in the womens section

Will get links in Monday. GL

[Aye BRUH]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post8747484

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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?487926-SPOTLIGHT-Enbombz-Vs-Jonny-Blaze(Rubber-match-20FLpts)

[Spree]

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[Spree]

thanks for the ext. key'd this up wit my 45 min break

See....
i'll hit u W/ a homicide, Cuz-set for a pound to the face
so wen yall fallow Aye Track? its evidence leading to him sarounded by tape
hammer on this fake vet, punch'n ya nose till u fall quick
verdict'll End W/tears,... & we didnt get to judge the one u fall in
put ya heart in'a dark hole, My guns'll put u up on the shelf
The Open Arm's I throw have ya chest caved in till u huggin ya self
Dumb bitch, Gut feelin u gon win? well im Done kid
i'll squeeze the AR-Ab, but Blowin 3 is more that'll land in ya stomach
ya girl gotta price on u, asked me to roll up W/a kill, bro
so you'll see me in a mask era, than kill her for leaving that on my pillow

[Attack of the Muff]

You get eaten by the gators in LLL, cant even defeat his peers
Makes sense that his wack ass runs the FL better than William Grier
(iono who that is man. is it some coach orsomething? im guessing. I see the gators/fl shit but im not too sure)
This dude aint the best, the blade'll put em to rest
I'll put 1 across his throat w/o hinting for a signal of death
(ok)
Im a hero to ya dumb hoe, when i fuck her she knows its deep
My dick'll launch that 'bat in the sky' till all the villains clear the streets
(seen similar bat/batman lines. more along the lines of bat being up high to bash someones skull in. not really feeling the whole dick sending a bat in the sky angle)
It was a mistake giving me time, my writings known to win
i'd Bash you with a key up but we know how that story ends
(I might be missing something but as is? kind ofbland)
Your not a ladies man, just a creep thats always flexin
He's only a 'panty dropper' when he's caught in the womens section
(lmao this was kinda cool tho)

i'll hit u W/ a homicide, Cuz-set for a pound to the face
so wen yall fallow Aye Track? its evidence leading to him sarounded by tape
(this was pretty cool)
hammer on this fake vet, punch'n ya nose till u fall quick
verdict'll End W/tears,... & we didnt get to judge the one u fall in
(tiers/tears hella old . not feelingthe flip)
put ya heart in'a dark hole, My guns'll put u up on the shelf
The Open Arm's I throw have ya chest caved in till u huggin ya self
(worded slickly. but the visual kind of left much to be desired. I see the open arms part but caving someone chest till they hug themselves sounds odd to me)
Dumb bitch, Gut feelin u gon win? well im Done kid
i'll squeeze the AR-Ab, but Blowin 3 is more that'll land in ya stomach
(ehhhhhhh)
ya girl gotta price on u, asked me to roll up W/a kill, bro
so you'll see me in a mask era, than kill her for leaving that on my pillow
( I like the wp. but seeing u in a mask era makes no sense but I know whatu mean via context clues. its ok)

incredibly close. tied in quotes at one a piece w/ one ok line after that by each

im comparing the two quotes....and I think aye bruh got it by a hair

its his closer r vs ks' opener

n I got a pretty funny visual of someone in dillards picking up n observing panties..n then wen someone approaches like wtf ..they just immediately drop the panties. that's lol pretty good

I got aye bruh by a hair but it can go either way

v/aye bruh

[Aye BRUH]

Voted on og n afox... Fern n joe boston

[puravida]

Been browsing around and...

You get eaten by the gators in LLL, cant even defeat his peers
Makes sense that his wack ass runs the FL better than William Grier
ok I like this. Decently worded.
This dude aint the best, the blade'll put em to rest
I'll put 1 across his throat w/o hinting for a signal of death
nah, not feeling this. too plain.
Im a hero to ya dumb hoe, when i fuck her she knows its deep
My dick'll launch that 'bat in the sky' till all the villains clear the streets
eh, I see the concept. Could have been delivered better.
It was a mistake giving me time, my writings known to win
i'd Bash you with a key up but we know how that story ends
nope. not feeling this
Your not a ladies man, just a creep thats always flexin
He's only a 'panty dropper' when he's caught in the womens section
lol eh, ok.

Will get links in Monday. GL

vs

thanks for the ext. key'd this up wit my 45 min break

See....
i'll hit u W/ a homicide, Cuz-set for a pound to the face
so wen yall fallow Aye Track? its evidence leading to him sarounded by tape
ok, but not feeling the wording so much
hammer on this fake vet, punch'n ya nose till u fall quick
verdict'll End W/tears,... & we didnt get to judge the one u fall in
nah, dont like the way this was executed nor the concept really
put ya heart in'a dark hole, My guns'll put u up on the shelf
The Open Arm's I throw have ya chest caved in till u huggin ya self
lol nah, not feeling this punch
Dumb bitch, Gut feelin u gon win? well im Done kid
i'll squeeze the AR-Ab, but Blowin 3 is more that'll land in ya stomach
meh not feeling this either
ya girl gotta price on u, asked me to roll up W/a kill, bro
so you'll see me in a mask era, than kill her for leaving that on my pillow
decent wp, didnt like the way it was delivered

vote / aye bruh

going with a.b on this one due to better execution and just better flips. kill had some decent concept just not executed the best way

decent battle

[Clout]

Been browsing around and...

You get eaten by the gators in LLL, cant even defeat his peers
Makes sense that his wack ass runs the FL better than William Grier
Light, needs better wording on the punchline. Set up was good but ur punch is lacking creativity.
This dude aint the best, the blade'll put em to rest
I'll put 1 across his throat w/o hinting for a signal of death
I actually like this, creative. this isn't a haymaker, I just dig it.
Im a hero to ya dumb hoe, when i fuck her she knows its deep
My dick'll launch that 'bat in the sky' till all the villains clear the streets
No
It was a mistake giving me time, my writings known to win
i'd Bash you with a key up but we know how that story ends
No
Your not a ladies man, just a creep thats always flexin
He's only a 'panty dropper' when he's caught in the womens section
Lol, cool

Will get links in Monday. GL

thanks for the ext. key'd this up wit my 45 min break

See....
i'll hit u W/ a homicide, Cuz-set for a pound to the face
so wen yall fallow Aye Track? its evidence leading to him sarounded by tape
Casette/Cuz-set eh, I like the creativity just not the way you worded the set up. The idea behind the punch is fire, but the wording isn't clean enough to have this do more then be asoft land.
hammer on this fake vet, punch'n ya nose till u fall quick
verdict'll End W/tears,... & we didnt get to judge the one u fall in
tier/tears is played, I didn't like the wording here. Quick/In might be a slant rhyme at best.
put ya heart in'a dark hole, My guns'll put u up on the shelf
The Open Arm's I throw have ya chest caved in till u huggin ya self
I actually like this, could be strung together better. But this I like.
Dumb bitch, Gut feelin u gon win? well im Done kid
i'll squeeze the AR-Ab, but Blowin 3 is more that'll land in ya stomach
No
ya girl gotta price on u, asked me to roll up W/a kill, bro
so you'll see me in a mask era, than kill her for leaving that on my pillow
I really like the fact your attempting wordplay, I really do. Its just I think you need to take more time and refine your wording. I'm not sure if you're taking on too many battles at once & rushing verses out the door. But you have the ideas/concepts. But you lack the clean wording to really do these concepts justice.

v/ Aye Bruh

Aye bruh you need to bring better concepts and harsher impact. Killing spree your wording is always the issue with you, its not concepts per say. Its trying to get your punches to sound fluent and witty. You either rush your bars or you try to over complicate the wording a lot.

[Lenox]

Aye: William Greer, bat in sky..

Vs

KS: mask era.. (Decent at best)..

Vote: AYE.. He dropped decent in this battle.. He's shaking off the rust nicely.. Felt KS wording killed him in this one
Meh battle at best.. Was expecting more

[Tim]

Aye Brah wins

4-0 ko