morning keystyle..feed appr.

[!bailey!]

Just woke up 10 min keystyle
Feed is apreciated/ remember this is
10min key so feed on that
First post..

Minds always flowin like water/
Raised myself-no mothr or father//
Prayed for a girl-
God blessed me with 2 sons-no daughter/
No-job-no-money-25-no-notta!/
Still heart as gold-need help..I gotch ya//
Bailey be einstein-mathmatecian
Problem-solva/
Learned wisdom from the streats/
How to take words an mix em wita beat//
Like my women-i know I have rythm in the sheets/
A viciouse lyrical beast/
Made a lot of mistakes-fell on my face/
Learned at a young age-
Pick myselfe up-and get on in a rage//
Big time sinna/
pussie for breakfest-lunch-an dinna/
New beginna/
Always get shit for being white/
More or less for being so nice/
Banged my ex-yesterday-twice/
Big mistake-now I have feelings come back/
Need an out-a nice pussie to get back on track/


P.s (-) are pauses either brief or slow

[Celph Taut]

Eh, certainly a modest effort. You have stuff to talk about. OK writing/wording through out. The subject isn't half bad. Something that'd be more appreciated in audio. Decent structure. Alright wording and material overall. Keep elevating...

[!bailey!]

thanks my man!
And ya everyone says I'm better on audio
That's why I'm tryin to get into good writing

[kontextisgay]

you suck