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    Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs (W) ~feed-back~ (0-0)


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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    in.

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    kid lives in false reality...got more imagination than detail
    cuz all his Dreams Coming Alive...cept' the ones involving females

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    K look he can barely throw a punch from brain cells dying from a weed pack
    I mean look how retarded he is...he can barely give a decent "feed back"
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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    thought andrew did a good attempt on the np approach but concept played. I thought feedbacks punch was a little more creative on the concept

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    wording for andrew messed it for him while FB was played out

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    v/ fb liked his punch better even though old
    .. im back

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    andrew this battle was yours to lose, you really could have had this one... FB dropped a old concept that was less then adverage but drew your wording was off and u used "barely" twice and your punch was on par with FB... so based on flow and overall structure

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    v/ FB

    feedback names plays are..well played unless you get a really fresh take at it. FB had a line that made me laugh a bit.

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    very played concept from Drew. coulda thought of something doper. FB's was aight. nothing to brag about. just a decent shot.

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    Both of your set ups are weak

    Feed had more of a hit with his, as played.out as the concept was it was just more of a punch. And his flowed better

    Andrew you said"from" twice "barely" twice and "look" twice, in two lines that is not okay.

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    good attempt on a name play, andrew, but it was a fail.. feedback wasnt original but it still stung worse..

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    Re: Week 2: Andrewert (0-0) vs ~feed-back~ (0-0)

    Andrew was pretty wordy and it took off of his sting.

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