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I only accepted this cause you cant beat me with my wackest shit....
So..
when the phrase ' versatile ' comes up, dont even respond dude..
...cause we aint talkin about ya skill, more like where the police found you
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
fall past but i'll take'em any season no doubt...
..cause ya concepts barely scratch the surface...unlike my rake that'll take ya face out
bitch i break records & ya history will be lookin shitty
talk about ' vers size ' all you want... i'll still make'em look like a bitch, no peace treaty
Shit like this^^ lets me you have a low chance of survivalOriginally Posted by Vica/Versa
honestly... with that quality, Bos has got to be you're only top rival
Sem'll turn this broke bitch to a house maid after this duel
Vice'll be coming to a town near you...mowing the lawn 7 clean the pool
12...easy
So we using other examples of eachothers past work....okay got it....
I see you trying to cherry pick...take people you think are easy-bitch move=wrong move.....
This cat wears g-strings to dance for tips,and is passed around the yard for cigarettes/
He thinks he's got swag~yet spits more sperm then a box of used mags in a bukkake pagent/
Put ya hand up when I'm talking~thats what real men supposed to do/
Well, I'm a man, and your extensions is showing you pre-op dude/
Im killing you like baby seals, clubs to you face and back/
Ya verses is busted like ya dads seeds all over ya face and back/
You want a visual like televisions dipicting gang violence fear/
I'm still recovering from beating you with my keyboard you queer/
Drop the napalm and unleash the guns~ya times just run out/
Semblance C.I.T daddies D.I.C's all in his ass and mouth/
LOL...Votes
Last bar should be & not 7
when the phrase ' versatile ' comes up, dont even respond dude..
...cause we aint talkin about ya skill, more like where the police found you
OK opener
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
decent
fall past but i'll take'em any season no doubt...
..cause ya concepts barely scratch the surface...unlike my rake that'll take ya face out
cool
bitch i break records & ya history will be lookin shitty
talk about ' vers size ' all you want... i'll still make'em look like a bitch, no peace treaty
nah, not really feelin this
Shit like this^^ lets me you have a low chance of survival
honestly... with that quality, Bos has got to be you're only top rival
I kno I'm good lol. Ok punch
Sem'll turn this broke bitch to a house maid after this duel
Vice'll be coming to a town near you...mowing the lawn 7 clean the pool
aight ender
vs
This cat wears g-strings to dance for tips,and is passed around the yard for cigarettes/
He thinks he's got swag~yet spits more sperm then a box of used mags in a bukkake pagent/
decent opener
Put ya hand up when I'm talking~thats what real men supposed to do/
Well, I'm a man, and your extensions is showing you pre-op dude/
Dont really get this one tbh
Im killing you like baby seals, clubs to you face and back/
Ya verses is busted like ya dads seeds all over ya face and back/
set-up and punch were irrelevant
You want a visual like televisions dipicting gang violence fear/
I'm still recovering from beating you with my keyboard you queer/
kinda weakish but ok.
Drop the napalm and unleash the guns~ya times just run out/
Semblance C.I.T daddies D.I.C's all in his ass and mouth/
meh np attempt
V/ Semb for more consistency and better pucnhes. No hate, keep battling fellas
Take a Look at my Life
when the phrase ' versatile ' comes up, dont even respond dude..
...cause we aint talkin about ya skill, more like where the police found you
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
fall past but i'll take'em any season no doubt...
vs
Put ya hand up when I'm talking~thats what real men supposed to do/
Well, I'm a man, and your extensions is showing you pre-op dude/
sembs verse was more polished and as far as punchlines, was more battle orientated . his first three bars in my opinion were the best bars of the battle. nothing really stood out too much from Vice, he lacked concepts and execution. overall my votes goes to semb.
CIT
when the phrase ' versatile ' comes up, dont even respond dude..
...cause we aint talkin about ya skill, more like where the police found you
good concept on opener here nice np
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
wasnt really feeling this np reference
fall past but i'll take'em any season no doubt...
..cause ya concepts barely scratch the surface...unlike my rake that'll take ya face out
not bad but needed more polished wording here
bitch i break records & ya history will be lookin shitty
talk about ' vers size ' all you want... i'll still make'em look like a bitch, no peace treaty
this had potential for the concept but again ur wording hurt this
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Originally Posted by Vica/Versa
Bos gets killed on here like muslims in the crusades/
If he actually had win it was because the judges were paid/
Shit like this^^ lets me you have a low chance of survival
honestly... with that quality, Bos has got to be you're only top rival
ok not a bad personal approach
Sem'll turn this broke bitch to a house maid after this duel
Vice'll be coming to a town near you...mowing the lawn 7 clean the pool
just ok for me
Vice/Versa
This cat wears g-strings to dance for tips,and is passed around the yard for cigarettes/
He thinks he's got swag~yet spits more sperm then a box of used mags in a bukkake pagent/
not a bad concept lol but try not to make lines stretched
Put ya hand up
when I'm talking~thats what real men supposed to do/
Well, I'm a man, and your extensions is showing you pre-op dude/
this wording could been better but ok reference here possibly trying a personal here???
Im killing you like baby seals, clubs to you face and back/
Ya verses is busted like ya dads seeds all over ya face and back/
nah didnt like this reference felt setup wasnt relevant to the finisher here coulda stayed on topic with ur setup
You want a visual like televisions dipicting gang violence fear/
I'm still recovering from beating you with my keyboard you queer/
nah wasnt feeling this kinda weak
Drop the napalm and unleash the guns~ya times just run out/
Semblance C.I.T daddies D.I.C's all in his ass and mouth/
nah wasnt feeling this
I thought vice versa first two bars wasnt bad then he just fell off after that with the irrelevant concept and overall misses. CIT had some ok punches in this but needs to polish up his wording in places. I thought CIT'S opener and his personal hit enough to get him the win he also had the better misses that would hit if he polished his wording up like i said. No hate to Vice but i feel he has some potential but feels he needs to choose more creative concepts.
V/CIT
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Up up & away
CIT
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
Sem'll turn this broke bitch to a house maid after this duel
Vice'll be coming to a town near you...mowing the lawn 7 clean the pool
vs
VV
Nothing that was a good punch.
v/ CIT
this was completely one sided. CIT didnt have a verse that hit hard by any means but he did enough to get the win here.
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when the phrase ' versatile ' comes up, dont even respond dude..
...cause we aint talkin about ya skill, more like where the police found you
you're a hoe. i treat him like a bitch every time i see'em
but today i'll slay VV like me & to virgins had a threesome
fall past but i'll take'em any season no doubt...
..cause ya concepts barely scratch the surface...unlike my rake that'll take ya face out
vs
nothing outstanding
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sem had the better polished verse with decent np and some personals. Versa's first two bars were a lil ok but he fell off hard after that.
V/sem
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