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Thread: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

  1. September 14th, 2011, 02:34 PM #1
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    Arrow Demons (Produced By J.Demers)



    Check this beat out & give me some feedback please, some of you might have heard it on my youtube channel but i added a small sample in it & uploaded it again

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...39#post8252239
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...37#post8252237

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  2. September 14th, 2011, 03:44 PM #2
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    too repetitive and simple for my taste...it would need more going on imo...
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  3. September 14th, 2011, 03:48 PM #3
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    Quote Originally Posted by Omis Cid View Post
    too repetitive and simple for my taste...it would need more going on imo...
    That's cool I respect your opinion man
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  4. September 14th, 2011, 04:18 PM #4
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    I think its pretty dope, not those new school whack ass instrumentals. Keep it up bruh
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  5. September 14th, 2011, 07:35 PM #5
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    Quote Originally Posted by Bos View Post
    I think its pretty dope, not those new school whack ass instrumentals. Keep it up bruh
    thnaks man if your interested in old school beats then def check out more of my beats because old school 90s type of shit is the style of my beats
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  6. September 14th, 2011, 07:42 PM #6
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    loving the intro bass on this man !!!!

    this would be good for a battle !
    need to add more to it to be a song though bro

    drums are dirty fo sho but other than that there isnt much else to comment on as the beat is very much the same throughout!!!!! keep elevating tho man
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    Quote Originally Posted by J-min View Post
    loving the intro bass on this man !!!!

    this would be good for a battle !
    need to add more to it to be a song though bro

    drums are dirty fo sho but other than that there isnt much else to comment on as the beat is very much the same throughout!!!!! keep elevating tho man
    thnaks i appreciate the feedback man
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    the drum and bass hits are dope.

    started boring though, after the laugh i thought it'd drop..it didnt really drop that good

    its kinda boring in that sense, it needs something when it drops to change. a synth maybe, or some keys. the sample on its own isnt enough.
    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...928/index.html

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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    there was no discernible song structure lol.

    it was like
    slight intro
    verse
    break
    verse
    break
    verse.


    you need to have some structure a bridge a chorus a b section.

    but i loved the vibe definitely old school wu tang ish
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  10. September 16th, 2011, 10:12 PM #10
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    Re: Demons (Produced By J.Demers)

    thanks appreciate the feedback ill try to work on those in the future when making my beats
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