I liked it. noticed the multis. good vocab. good flow. only thing I'd say is try to add more imagery/metaphors
I liked it. noticed the multis. good vocab. good flow. only thing I'd say is try to add more imagery/metaphors
Thanks for the feed...uppin!
you listen to alot of immortal tech dont you? its like his style..
yet the rhyme seems incomplete.. reminds this of me somehow like it gets good then it stops.. not concept about this just a good ass written just how i like it..
flow was nice no line combating with each other because the syllables were consistent. vocab was pretty good to have such a good flow most of the time when people try to throw in longer words it stumbles their flow.. not here buddy.
great job jr.
Uppin this throwback...
This was dope.
AI
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Lol thanks for the feed TI.