untold vs. mr.iceman

[Untold.]

yo, check in and drop ya stuff. set the rules to. peace!

[Untold.]

yo, i'll be back lata tonight to post my shit.............. good luck and peace!!!!!!...............

[mr.iceman]

aight checkin in

here are the rules
no hate vote d/r or crew vote
the usaual

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[Untold.]

aiight.......... thats straight........ i wont be on for a while so i'm just gonna drop my shit lata........ peace!!!!!!!

[mr.iceman]

untold nigga you gonna have to come hard cause im the real shit/
you might not want to view this post lil nigga cause my rhymes are explict/

my rhymes are coverin you like the glove just call me gary payton/
yo rhymes wouldnt be fire even if you teamed up wit satin/

no one likes you my nigga only letters you get are hate mail/
im gonna downgrade you from a hurricane to a tropical storm like isabel/

nigga im a raw boxer dont step up in the ring/
icemans punches are leavin untold beat down like rodney king/

you get no pussy and have no girls so you call yo self the lone ranger/
r.kelly wants to rape this nigga now his virginty is in danger/

ive just ripped you my nigga im gonna add you to my lyrically merked binder/
iceman merked untold and now the 5-0 cant find her/

[Untold.]

aiight, lets play......

you runnin ya mouth like you got somethin good to say/
nigga tell me i'm gonna get beat, sorry, but not today//

you should say things that you know you cant back up/
why don't you just leave now, i'll even help you pack up//

just go back home to mommy and tell her you merked/
cause no ones laughin at ya kiddie jokes, they just didnt work//

i hope you prey to god, cause yu'll soon be seein him in heaven/
cause i'll drop you harder that the planes did on 9-11//

you probably hope i show you mercy, but i wont/
i already got the coriner set ya place right afta i make ya croak//

please tell me this kid doesnt really think hes hard/
cause the only thing he got hard in him is whats in his back-yard//(his booty-hole)

i hope you got ammo, cause i got bombs on brigade/
bustin ya guts everywhere like they was on parade//

[Untold.]

aiight...... i dropped my shit...... i know its weak but i'm in a hurry..... peace and good luck!!!!

[J-Wizzle]

flow-ice
multis-none
punches-ice
creativity-ice

untold you need to elevate a little

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[9 Millimeter]

this was an aight battle but you both have to elevate. my vote goes to ice cause he had harder punches

[Smokin Dro]

nice battle for newbs but you both need to elevate. this battle was aight. i like iceman in this i liked his vocab better as well as his punches

[magic dust]

ice had the flow and the punches so in this battle i think ice won
hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=79878

[mr.iceman]

uppin fo votes

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[MultiVersEal]

wow yall have to be the same person or sumthin yall have like the exact same style. or maybe its jus cuz yall both newbies.

i think i liked icemans shit better the flow was more consistent. a little more creative than untold the r kelly line was kinda funny. yeah.

yall both need to elevate though there wasnt anything strikin in this battle. up the vocab both yall and untold improve ya flow

vote iceman

payce

[mr.iceman]

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[Rappad]

Vote=ice
This was close, I think both of you need mad elevation, both had consistent flow, but punches were harder in ice's verse. Here's how I saw it.

Punches-ice
flow-tie
wordplay-tie
structure-tie
vocab-tie
creativity-ice

just won it with punches, close battle. No hate.