Black - Life is a Motion Picture.

[Mr. Black]

thanks for the tip .....

[Insaner]

Feeling the meaning man, the whole world's in you're head just perceived by your brain using electrical signals from your sensory organs. Amazingly written stuff as well SOLID and versatile rhyme schemes all the way through that flow amazingly. Amazing imagery as well man just amazing overall I have NO criticisms. Professional stuff right there man.

[DeftFlow]

Word...this shit is dope. You do an excellent job of balancing an intricate rhyme pattern with really bringing your words to life, keeping up theme, and exploring a subject. no real criticism here.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...048/index.html

[Mr. Black]

honestly .. if all youre gonna say is "this was great no criticism" in a sentence or two, dont EVER expect me to comment on your pieces with any kind of insightful breakdown.

that bein said .. thanks fam.

[DeftFlow]

I gave you insight on the last one, Mannequin...and in this case, you pretty much had the same thing going. I know what I'm talking about (most of the time) but I certainly am no expert; thus there are limits to the feedback I can give. I was not able to help you out on this poem; that doesn't mean you must avoid giving me advice on my own piece.

[English]

lmao