h.t vs dj dommer

[h.t]

thanks
uppin 3

[h.t]

uppin

[Wine-O]

DJ Dommer-
that shit sick, but i spit like a llama, call me dj domma
the new drama, that me since the orginal got arristed for piracy.
...nah...
If i eva get arrested itll be homacide, h.t will be killed for his lines.
if they were mines, id just kill myself. sucidal ht? do ya need some help.
if ya afraid to pull the trigger then ill do it myself
...no....
ya yo shit is so weak, its fuckin my mind up i think i may need to see a shrink.
cuz u may be on the brink of extinction, or extraction, lock load time for action.
....meh....
this is over, but my shit will never ever en
bluetooth me if ya shit eva begins
....no sorry...

h.t-
Keyed this quick but still the only opportunity im giving you's to lose
n any chance that dj turntables in this battle are chopped and screwed
...nice, good wordplay...
Your broke as fuck sucking dick for internet time this rhyme's true
just to pay rent his mother's getting passed around like the swine flu
...good, new concept(swine flu)....liked it...
I seen DJ's last battle dude told everybody that he's the better man
in the end id say that you broke PROmise but i didn't see one punch land
....alright alright....
Damn loser it must suck to know i can beat you on my cell well at a party
if somehow you attempt taking a single shot i'll chase u with a bottle of bacardi
...decent...
pardon me lmao ^^ sorry for the filler im drunk as fuck
you could beat me throwing one punch pussy but i'll bet you duck
...ok closer....

alright h.t this verse was a little less like the one i just read, um a couple lines seemed forced i dont know maybe you were really drunk and just didnt try as hard but still a good verse. Dommer you need some actual punches and personals not just shit that rhymes together that doesnt hit your opponent. keep working on it..
v/h.t

[h.t]

thanks man

uppin for close

[..Compa..]

Keyed this quick but still the only opportunity im giving you's to lose
n any chance that dj turntables in this battle are chopped and screwed
Damn loser it must suck to know i can beat you on my cell well at a party
if somehow you attempt taking a single shot i'll chase u with a bottle of bacardi


Vs

Nothing


Overall vote- h.t yea not only better structure but better use in punches/personal he had those 2 bar's really all he needed still though you was constant h.t