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I'm too into LLL rite now to do more than that so too bad....
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Sure told you Il be Here
Blah,Blah half assed 12 Lines as agreed bar
This the champ match bitch Ras here came to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
12 easy..bitch
Blah,Blah half assed 12 Lines as agreed bar
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
12 easy..bitch
edit
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
pretty good opener
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
lol nice
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
rediculously played. i'm pretty sure barcotic even said something like this in his last FL HW match
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
played as well. ok tho
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
ok
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
could've been worded into a better punch, but ok
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
lol I get it, but its pretty bad wordplay
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
pretty good
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
fake personal. ok tho
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
lol nice
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
no
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
nothin special
Overall this battle was pretty even. Barcotic had a good flow as always which made his punches sound better than they are, as always. Surprisingly though ras came with the harder punches so he's getting my vote
Vote-R.A.S. jr
I'm a combination of everything you wish you were
ras
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
i would say bar lines i splayed, but i really liked this
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
blah, no , cvome on ras after a nice opener this shouldnt be here
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
umm u do realize this is kinda like bitin to me?
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
concept was nice
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
this was ok man
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
this was clever i thought
BAR
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
lmao dude desert n center dont ryhme
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
lmao this was nice man
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
ughhh
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
lol this was nice
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
no
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
fuckin loved this line
aight to me with ras its like he is on the verge of droppin somehting sick each line, but he doesnt, like his buildup is sick, but then he follows thru with nothing,
bar, dawg u had 2 good bars, but u could of come alot better
AND u stole a concept man, it was almos like biting, esp since it happened to be in the collab i was in
vote:bar
RAS watch ur concepts man as i said, its almos like u bit
ok my bad I'll watch it
ras
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
...not bad man..
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
...lol was aiight..
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
...played i've seen this before...
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
...not bad could of come harder on this...
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
...nice..
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
...was set up nice like the obama bit but just ended weak..
BAR
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
...was set up nice man wordplay was sweet just the ending dint go..
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
..haha sick...
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
...nah...
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
...lol nice man...
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
...hmm not bad seen better from you..
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
...sick man flow and wording sick...
iv seen better from you both, but MY VOTE = Barcotics simply 'cause his personel and punch's only a couple hit harder than R.A.S iv seen better from you bars tho. R.A.S i think your set ups wear tight just at the end of the bar was just ending up a weak hit.
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The bitch type I dislike, I'm rougher than a fist fight,
All chicks ain't shit, ain't no such thing as Miss Right,
So we can never be a couple hun
Fuck love, all I got for ho's is hard dick and bubble gum. - Big L
Ras Jr
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
Nice opener
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
Good play on words but weak punch
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
Meh kinda reminded me of what Canibus said to LL....a little played
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
Nice
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
Meh
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
Weak Closer
Barcotic
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
Lmfao WoW nice opener
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
lol nice
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
it was okay but kinda played, defiantly not a hard punch at all
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
Blah
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
Good play on words, but i think you stumbled w/ the delivery
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
Nice Closer
Overall it was a pretty close match Ras was more constant in his verse with more constant punches...Bar threw some crazy Hailmarries in the beginning but later fell off towards the end.
VOTE BAR
in the end bar bad better concepts and more clever/hard hitting punches
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This the champ match bitch Ras here came to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
^^pre-internet type played
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
^^played
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
^^too basic to be good
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
^^nah played, spit's done it better
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
^^ok
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
^^see what you tried to do, needed better wording
vs.
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
^^kinda forced, ok
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
^^not too bad
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
^^nah, played
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
^^nah, seen much better plays on wearing the belt
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
^^meh
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
^^meh
you both used too many ideas Ive seen before
still I think Bar just edged it, has slightly better wording
v/Bar
4-1 me..^^
^^how did you work that out? You cheater, you looked at the poll didn't you?!
R.A.S. jr
This the champ match bitch Ras came here to make a statement
So I'm raising the Bar this battle..then slamin his ass to the pavement
..decent actully 2.3/5 opener..
Ras not losing I dont Know what other drugs you been around
But we only call you a dope head..hoping you put the crack down
..played concept..
You been the champ to long, and I'll tear you apart to get it
No kiddin, When I snatch the belt your Torso is comin with it
lol not bad
Even ya dick rider wont vote For you,ya Fame is coming to an end
After this Camcording me is the only way your going to record some wins
..not bad here, liked it..
Fuck a diss,the truths coming out in here,ya rhymes r wack n' dead
I wont point fingers at who's lame..Ima just use my fist instead
..lol nice..
Watch the newb votes pour in,to bad it's not ya cheering section
All you'll hear is O's when I bomb-ya,So Dont be surprise when I win this election
..decent but could've been better 2/5 ender..
Barcotic
I know you have an ass chin, I'll uppercut it's scary center,
you'll See-air-RA.... right before you land in that very desert..
..lol nice nameplay liked this concept and this did rhyme, ya need to sound it out if you dont see it 2.7/5 opener..
I already killed you twice, but there's clearly a new you breathing,
cuz I see a big difference.... in your face from the 1st two beatings..
..lol very niceee..
Poor kid, literally, cuz the only bill you have is a fake twenty,
to me this is a hat trick.... which is what YOU do to make money..
..ok, but could've been better here..
You'll never ever be the FL champion so stop steppin to Mike,
you couldn't even wear the belt.... you only own dresses n tights..
..lol funny bar here..
I'm clearly far far ahead of you, more than a couple miles EASY,
you're John Cena's look a like with binoculars.... n still can't see me..
..ha not bad actully..
You're not a dope spitter, I flow sicker, you're no quitter but so bitter,
cuz if it's '3 strikes, you're out'.... you got me lookin like a pro pitcher..
..lol decent ender 2.5/5..
overall vote- Barcotic bit close here, but i felt bar edged it with 2 nice bar's.. this was a better hw match then tha last one bar had imo