Jay aka Krazy_8 Vs Ras Jr (Golden Standard Battle)

[RAS.]

I'm not complaing that was a bad vote on your part

[BEAZY813]

ur right, u had more lines that were better than his but his punchnnes hnit harder and his verse flowed better for me, i should have put this in the breakdown.

i feel i should put this down to add to my breakdown so everyone else understands too, only fair

[phrak]

im gonna vote jay on this one......jay had 4, half decent bars, the crips line was nice...ras, ionno, yours was aight but nothing really too aggressive or major for me...and quoting his shit in hte middle of your verse threw everything off...you had the better flow though...but i think jay pipped it on punches.

[phrak]

my bad for not using the poll, have voted up now.

[Jay aka Krazy_8]

3-0

[Vince]

Krazy 8-


I've got the most nerve so post nerd...I'm roastin this bitch
and like a perv with an urge i'm "EXPOSIN' THIS DICK"//
Nah...
my words do encourge so hopefully your tricked
into taking my bait...your post will get ripped//
No.
who is this false guy..you loss guy, hit you with an uppercut leave you cross-eyed
after this you gonna be more "BLUE" than the crips when they boss died //
Nice one.
you better recognize this newbie like you knew me
cuz in this you couldnt get "A-HEAD" of me if you blew me//
Rhymed "Me"..twice.
I'ma end this with who cares if i'm in I just bashed em and attack em
fuck R.A.S. JR. AND THE ACCRONYM//
Nah...


Vs.



R.A.S. Jr.-




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I'ma do the most work cuz I post first
you joke nerd you gonna get your hopes hurt//

Your straight trash kid,none of your bars are potent
But I'm being nice today....
because exposing ya wack ass lines is the only way ya gets shit is quoted
O.K...bad wording.
I don't need to try I got this win in the bag whether its paper or plastic
I guaranteed after this,they'll carry you out whether its a body bag or a casket
O.K.

Quote:
Interests:
Writting,Music,Youtube

LOL.....
Don't lie bitch you don't write,your just plain lame
Bet you don't touch pins,like gutter balls at bowling lanes
Nice line.

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Occupation:
Professional NetCee (LMAO)

wit verses I do floss how the hell can you call yourself a rival whore
He couldn't cut off the net if he hit buzzer-beaters in the final four
Dope punch.
You suck at text homie,arent you glad I'm finished
See for you the sky's the limit only cause I uppercut you into it
Weak closer.


V/ Ras took the win....

[RAS.]

3-1

[Jay aka Krazy_8]

whats up with this???

[Wordz AhGod.]

I've got the most nerve so post nerd...I'm roastin this bitch
and like a perv with an urge i'm "EXPOSIN' THIS DICK"//
not a punch, better attemp then your last battle its not really a punch.
my words do encourge so hopefully your tricked
into taking my bait...your post will get ripped//
not a punch, had a good set up and could have came hard but failed.
who is this false guy..you loss guy, hit you with an uppercut leave you cross-eyed
after this you gonna be more "BLUE" than the crips when they boss died (DAMN!)//
First off, adlibing yourself is a no go. Better attempt here, try and make your setups a little longer and if you add relivence to your punch, it can add to effect of it all.
you better recognize this newbie like you knew me
cuz in this you couldnt get "A-HEAD" of me if you blew me//
Nah, poor attempt here. if your going for a wordplay then you shouldn't emphasize the word your using because that makes it forced.
I'ma end this with who cares if i'm in I just bashed em and attack em
fuck R.A.S. JR. AND THE ACCRONYM//
not a punch, sounds a little like what Elcoqui used on me in our battle but this one is a bit older though. But its not a punch at all because of your lack of wording, you basically just said.. Fuck him and thats not a punch.

vs

Your straight trash kid,none of your bars are potent
But I'm being nice today....
because exposing ya wack ass lines is the only way ya gets shit is quoted
boo terrible punch here.
I don't need to try I got this win in the bag whether its paper or plastic
I guaranteed after this,they'll carry you out whether its a body bag or a casket
hmmm, souns like my grocery bag line that I used in LLL recently.
Don't lie bitch you don't write,your just plain lame
Bet you don't touch pins,like gutter balls at bowling lanes
why would he want to touch pins?
wit verses I do floss how the hell can you call yourself a rival whore
He couldn't cut off the net if he hit buzzer-beaters in the final four
nah, wording is bad and why would he want to cut off the net?? Make your setup relivent to this fact so as to explain why he would do this so that it connects.
You suck at text homie,arent you glad I'm finished
See for you the sky's the limit only cause I uppercut you into it
This is SUPER old, Im talking 04ish.. wording and everything man. You should be coming harder then this if you plan on sticking around in LLL.

well, when I first checked the polls I was wondering how Jay could have been up in this battle. After reading these verses and breaking them down, I see why. RAS you came extremely sub par in your verse and it cost you the easiest win you could ever get in FL. This is due to you maybe thinking to highly of yourself, not caring, or just thinking that people knowing about you would get you the win. I explained what was wrong with each of your verses to try and help you guys out so I wont go in any more details

V/ Jay aka Krazy 8

RTF on one of my battles please.

[DramaJones]

"I've got the most nerve so post nerd...I'm roastin this bitch
and like a perv with an urge i'm "EXPOSIN' THIS DICK"//
I like this line, very clever and a hard hittin punchline.

who is this false guy..you loss guy, hit you with an uppercut leave you cross-eyed
after this you gonna be more "BLUE" than the crips when they boss died (DAMN!)//
Enough said about this one. Very good.


Your straight trash kid,none of your bars are potent
But I'm being nice today....
because exposing ya wack ass lines is the only way ya gets shit is quoted.
I think he messed up what he was trynna type. Hot, if typed correctly.

Don't lie bitch you don't write,your just plain lame
Bet you don't touch pins,like gutter balls at bowling lanes

wit verses I do floss how the hell can you call yourself a rival whore
He couldn't cut off the net if he hit buzzer-beaters in the final four
These two right here, "OUCH!" could have been worded better, but still in all very clever.

If I could vote, Id have to say RAS.