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Thread: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

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    The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1



    The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

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    {File#1 Nightmare Styles }

    AHHH!!!!!!
    Look..

    Built a plastic surgeon around a fence while coloring a bright sense
    Tied my left hand to a pen and took my virginity with a poison syringe.
    Fucked my sisters along the stars where I ate their brains out on mars
    and eluded my intentions by dominating my soul with an axe to guard
    Amputated mouths thrown on my plate as my revelations penetrated out
    A fixed adrenaline poisoned by the re-verb shock given to the devil's house
    Problems drenched in devil sweat with angel piss eluding my embezzlement
    Tricking a gunslinger to royally guard this trickster..but this sword master
    Didn't cry Devil yet..
    Uneven looks shift stiff people to pick sides above grounds they stay off of
    A Valley of Depression locked away a fantastical glare in a priceless coffin
    Mixed batteries sending shock waves through an allusive but subtle cavalry
    Sorority caused weeping badly..to the point where it becomes Speechless Anatomy
    A sickle cell of trouble.. Stiff and hard to endure..the pain is harder than yours
    Stronger than sure..hard to endure..but the stamina itself is partially stored
    A cremated intestine..fed to famine Africans of sisters and brothers..
    One child ate a liver..to find out it was the one taken from his grandmother
    He looked upon me and started abducting me with shame
    I had no choice but to advise him "This is how America runs today"
    "We kill our families to save money and end up rich."
    "So with that said it is now time for you to be executed my fellow kid."
    I ripped his soul through his chest..
    Watched a perplexing chain reaction that calmed his fearing breath
    To mock his intuition throughout his sex..
    Thoroughly proves that the more lesser of the two was confused from death
    I didn't wanna kill that kid...he reminded me too much of my mother..
    But the real sad part about it was he was actually my little brother.


    {File # 21- Crashes in the Air}

    Fuck whoever came up with sky Waves Se7en.....
    Oh wait that was me...
    Fuck IT!

    I endanger species with feces that entangles souls gleefully
    Eating rotten piesel in front of a ravaged mother hurt deeply
    emotions reflect off my brains that connects stress 4 days
    But fuck Stress cause I could stress fully disconnect my ways
    I eat pies with blood instead of cherries with symbolized fairies
    Swallowing an attacking phantom through my dreams hoping it scares me
    I will have sex with myself..give myself AIDS throughout a pierced virus
    Her vagina was bloodied with blisters I watched my dad eat it in pure silence
    Yeah and it was good too when I got my turn..but I never did
    So what wasn't good about it was how confusing the shit went
    And it was the exact opposite of shit..so technically what I clearly meant
    Was that I sucked my own dick.
    Never mind, I lied in a confused rampaged that puts sodomy to wives
    And looks in the eyes of man to slap the face of deception from behind
    So fuck YOU!
    I will rip your brains and feed them to squirrels
    Before I use them as sex toys with my girl
    You need help dividing my guidance just because I am a shy kid
    Silence Bitch..
    There shall be no integrity that you shall display tonight then..
    A gun fledged to memories..yeah I caught a faceless smack
    to they undead ministry..
    Damien apparently wanted to finish me..
    And him being Satan's son is clearly a bad job consequently.
    So watch me die in a mist of clouds with misguided shit
    And until the day Bilayer makes Sky Waves Se7en II I'm not going to find him.


    { Fatal Nocturne-File # 34}

    It awakes in the business sense of fate
    Straight off the plane a forensic scent that belittles my name
    Senseless as treachery with the utensils to defense came
    Before that flattened my brains with a Singapore cane
    Earth's convenient movements
    Become allusive...once an illumination becomes fused in
    Watch my flirtatious movements
    signaling a fatal blow insured in my most memorial allusion
    We caught swords in our chest
    while footballs and scapegoats extorted our breaths
    Gods recorded this mess
    When fallen fireballs showed no remorse to the rest
    A soothing bird..with wings tickled into a majestic mist that's blowing the kettle
    ...A calm rondo of false rights
    Defended..in the privacy of how many lives weren't settled
    Sit
    Discuss
    Agree
    Shake
    And make pleas..
    Because if you become succumbed to a fatal injury
    Chances are your afraid of me
    A Convenient concoction...expressed openly..from various coasts
    ..omens of gold
    forfeiting a tribal sword extended into my butterfly rose...
    A Coyote disc...thrown across bloody sunsets
    Ravaged a wolf shield to my gunmen
    At gunpoint their hearts saw the savior arise..their hearts chose to plummet.

    { File # 50-I am Dallas-}

    Ethereal churches deferred from sickly intrigued verses
    To catapult prolific syndicates causes a mental combustion
    A terror cradle..rocked from hell to arcana to breathe deep in
    As we formerly watched bestowed palaces overwhelm our chaos legions
    Two lost versions of evil walked above coastal services of blood
    As hotels surrounded our surroundings surrounding my surroundings with blood
    Served ashes in caskets and fed them to robins in baskets..
    Gave twenty five axes to my Arabic crackheads to chop American asses
    Kill us.. I am Native American I will fire an arrow into your heritage
    Because these Valleys have forever sealed the keys to the temple from which I bled in..
    So Sacred

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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    Damn this was a long read lol...but it was quite entertaining if you're into the gore type shit which i'm a fan of...but one thing i noticed about this piece was that the lines seemed a bit stretched...like you were attempting to put to much info into one line..it could've been broken up a bit better to help with the consistancy of the flow..but the flow was cool..it just seemed to take forever to get to the point within your lines..I thought the take on the topic itself was very creative and I liked how you portrayed your imagery and certain wording/vocab you used...all in all this was a good piece..but as I said you should think of a way to cut down your lines a tad bit...other than that great read..keep dropping...

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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    This was dope man. I liked the Devil May Cry reference.
    Problems drenched in devil sweat with angel piss eluding my embezzlement
    Tricking a gunslinger to royally guard this trickster..but this sword master
    Didn't cry Devil yet..
    You gave off a good sense of imagery and the wording made it a smooth read. The flow was smooth as well. Your word choice was good, it wasn't really basic or too much for the piece. I enjoyed this piece very much. It was a good read. My favorite bars are:
    Because if you become succumbed to a fatal injury
    Chances are your afraid of me
    A Convenient concoction...expressed openly..from various coasts
    ..omens of gold
    forfeiting a tribal sword extended into my butterfly rose...
    But...
    He can never touch her again


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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    thanks for the feed

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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    uppin

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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    too long of a read for me, got a good amount tho...mmm, aint really the kinda shit im used to but i think u were goin 4 a spesific styl... IDK
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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    Stream of consciousness style rap is always a little tricky to read, especially with stetched lines and especially with so many lines to read. Having said that man, i loved the originality of the concept and the crazy imagery you threw in which made this feel like it was written by someone insane. It was a hard read though, but i liked the ambition of it. Keep with the experimental shit and OM HoF'll by coming your way before lone.

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    Re: The Lost Psychotic Files Vol.1

    appreciate johnny HNR coming up

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