very very ill........R.I.P......tha best emcee of D-12 aside from slim......very emotional piece...wordplay and creativity...imagery and rhyme scheme....vocab...the amount of complexity you used worked terrific...very emotional and raw piece.....much props...and RIP to Proof once again...hell be missed...dope drop..keep droppin tha hottness.~1~
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this was mad good......topic was very interesting and it caught my eye...
this flowed very well...smooth the whole way through...rhymes were good.
imagery and emotion was excellent..i felt it all the way...
overall this was a very tight peice..keep it up...peace~~
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I enjoyed the read, but I couldn't help to notice that some things in it were kind of wrong. Like the Bizarre thing, he wasn't really with him. Nontheless, it was still pretty tight. One thing I didn't like, though, was --
Gats fired, in attempts of bringing their enemies to a higher
..Ground, sound rumbling, earth shattering pain
-- how after higher you continued ground to the second line. It sort of messes up the flow a little in a way.
But overall, pretty nice piece.
R.I.P. Big Proof
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