Different Way

[ghostflow]

that peom was good
it was deep

NICE PIECE
8/10

[Baby-Smile'z]

thanks alot and i luv ur sigs they dope as hell....

[Big Boozy]

love the poem


u have a lot of anger and sadness n u........................

let it out and this will bring a new chapter n ya life.................... TRUST ME

after my cousin Donald died i was mad as hell gettin n2 trouble wit da police let the anger and sadness go n a verse and u need 2 do da same...........

how bout a poem 2 dedicate 2 ya sista///////// u will so much better after u write it............ Put your heart first

PEACE AND LOVE

[Baby-Smile'z]

thnks but after Nikkie left it was hard i dont have time for school but i make time and i manage 4 jobs NOW....and it is hard u try living in my shoes for 24 hrs u would hate it...

[!.VeRbZ.!]

nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love