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    short flow...

    My flows are ferocious,yall better not lose focus/
    I make masterful music, like Mr. Hollands Opus/
    Dudes is hopeless, me without rap's like a crackhead dopeless/
    The flows hot like spainish food/
    One false move ill make you, vanish dude/
    Believe me, ill leave you hardly breathin/
    Have you cryin like an infant teethin/
    I spit one of my verses n its sure to cause a disturbance/
    Shake you up like that movie Turbulence/
    I run threw you bitches like Jerome Bettis/
    Holler if you want war, ill load them chrome berrettas/
    Im-know-to-letta, few shots off into your, home or shelta/(shelter)
    Or the flow will melt ya/
    Either way, get it how you want it...~1~


    i think the flows kinda off but it sounded aright in my head...critique please

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    ThE kId BiG
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    ya, its good... use more complex words

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    ThE kId BiG
    Guest
    ^ wanna battle?

    ill go first

    yes or no?

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    im straight with battlin right now...im just tryin to work on my flow...i will in the future tho...ill pm you or suttin...~1~

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    ThE kId BiG
    Guest
    ^^ im waiting... lol

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    Dune Methane CrazyCarl's Avatar
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    Had some multis in there, keep that it, up it will help your flow. Keep practicing your wordplay, and you'll get better at wording it the best way. Flow was alright for this, maybe a little editing for syllable count to smooth it out.
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