Slo Flow VS G.Rappa

[Slo Flow]

10 lines...

Normal Rules...

Due in by 30 minutes.....

Check in....

[Slo Flow]

Checkin in...........

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[G.Rappa]

Cheking In........................................

[Slo Flow]

First things first kid, who you tryin to be
This just a new name, I aint a newbie
Dont fool yourself cuz you aint in the matrix
Cant dodge my punchlines, you gonna get hit
How you a G Rappa when you cant even rap
You dont take a breath after lines you take a big gap
Stop rappin kid, you got no career
Put on a skirt and give me a cheer
You're done, its over, dont bother commin back
Your lines are corny, yo this kid is wack

[G.Rappa]

yo yo. let me school this fool


Look at this chump slow flow.
if if his rhymes were money he'd have no dow.
but who can blame him, hes no pro.
he dont know nothing, hes like Joe shmo.
He gets scurrd easy when i lay down the blow.
If i call him out on the streets he wont show.
he'd call his pimp for help just like a good hoe.
bends ova to the front and touch his toe.
Gets raped from the back even by this flow.
say peace to slow flo cause he aint goan front no mo!

[Slo Flow]

votes would be appreciated

[Slo Flow]

uppin for votes..........

[Slo Flow]

uppin for votes.... please

[So SiK]

First things first kid, who you tryin to be
This just a new name, I aint a newbie

^^^^^weakk opener^^^^

Dont fool yourself cuz you aint in the matrix
Cant dodge my punchlines, you gonna get hit

^^^good punch^^^^

How you a G Rappa when you cant even rap
You dont take a breath after lines you take a big gap

^^^^ok personal^^^^^^^

Stop rappin kid, you got no career
Put on a skirt and give me a cheer

^^^^lol@ ^ good personal^^^^

You're done, its over, dont bother commin back
Your lines are corny, yo this kid is wack

^^^^^Decent Closer^^^^^^^^

Overall 8/10
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Look at this chump slow flow.
if if his rhymes were money he'd have no dow.

^^^^lol good opnener and personal^^^^

but who can blame him, hes no pro.
he dont know nothing, hes like Joe shmo.

^^^^weakkkkkkk^^^^

He gets scurrd easy when i lay down the blow.
If i call him out on the streets he wont show.

^^^^weakkk personal^^^^

he'd call his pimp for help just like a good hoe.
bends ova to the front and touch his toe.

^^^^^weakkk personal^^^^

Gets raped from the back even by this flow.
say peace to slow flo cause he aint goan front no mo!

^^^weakk bad closer^^^^^

overall 4/10
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Comments: G Rapper dont use ya whole verse rythmin off of one lil word makes ya drop weakk and wakkk....if u elevate and include more punches and personals like u opener u shud b good...pz


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