1.UPPiN need honest votes please not sheep votes. thanx peace
UNDEAD
÷Thìñg÷
1.UPPiN need honest votes please not sheep votes. thanx peace
how much wood would a wood chuck chuck if a wood chuck could chuck wood... upping this...
so far its 5-0 me but the poll says 1-1 wtf? lmao..............
no 1 even explained to even poll that whack ass D/R...................
uppin...............3............................. .............................................
Opener - Thing
Punches - Thing
Personals - Neither (wasn't feelin 'em)
Structure - Thing
Wordplay - Neither
Originality - Both
Finisher - Thing
Thing - I've seen you come alot harder than this before, your opener was pretty good. Flow'd nicely. A little wordplay.. Punches were decent, not many personals. But you definatly got this with out a shadow of the doubt.
Undead - your verse was to simplistic, not many punches. And when you tried, they weren't really directed towards thing that much. Verse was very weak, elevate man.
V/Thing
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uppin 4th time.............................................. ....
Yo vote Thing
Flow/ he had a nice flow going on with gud rhymes, wordplay could be betta tho, gud variation; Undead didn't have a lot of variation, his rhymes were played
Punchlines: Thing had more punches and they just came harder than Undead cuz his punches were all played i thought
Personals: They both had sum weak personals but Thing had more and his personals just came betta than Undead
Multis: Thing had sum nice multis goin on while Undead were just played
Structure: They both had an aight structure I suppose
Overall vote: Thing
5th and last up...........
Aight..
First off....ya all heard of personals before right? Aight cool, use em
Undead - Ok, you need to work on your approach. Your flow and structure were the only things workin for ya here. Your punches need to elevate, along with yur personals..this was a hit or miss thing goin on, and you missed alot. Also, try rhyming at the end of each line..most of your bars didnt rhyme at the end, which threw off the rhyme scheme totally.
Thing - Ive seen better man, however, you too had an ok verse, personals and punches were obviously harder, and flow and structure were fine. Wordplay was minimal, ditto on multis..you got this one pretty easily however..not a bad spit....
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Hit this back plzzzz..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120587
^^^those were ur best lines.....had a decent punch......overall ur verse was pretty good......good structure.......flow was on target......u had some decent metas......wordplay was ok........some of ya punches connected......personals were pretty good.....Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
^^^prolly ur best two lines......first line had potential if worded way better......attempted wordplay and personal......punch was wack.....overall ur verse sucked......structure was bad.......flow fell off.......metas were ok.......u had the wackest rhyme scheme ive seen in awhile.......ur lines didnt rhyme at all.......ur punches didnt connect.....u attempted personals, but that didnt work out to well.......
conclusion - thing takes this in a landslide.....he had structure......good flow.......they both had some metas......thing had ok wordplay........unlike undead some of things punches connected.......undead attempted like one personals, while thing had alot......thing overall just had a way better verse so he gets my vote.....
VOTE - THING
yo since i took to leave my opinion id appreciate if ud hit up the link in my sig......
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uppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggggg ggg
Eh.. i didnt kno about the 300+ post to vote rule
It was specified in the rules.. so eh..
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Thing 4
UNDEAD 0
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ok here it is......
thing =
ya came well for the most part, punches were hittin hard and flow was perfect. structure was also good. and vocab lacked!!!
undead =
ok ya had some ok lines but nothing really hit hard, flow was fine and also structure!! vocab also lacked!!!
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my vote goes to thing because he had stronger punches and a witier verse
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