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Thread: Mom I'm sorry

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    Life & Times
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    Mom I'm sorry

    This is just a little keystyle. It's about whats goin on in my life right now.


    Mom why do we gotta be this way....fightin everyday/
    Last night was the worst....we aint even spoke today/
    Is there anythin I can say to make it better....to stop the pain/
    I hate the fact that when somebody mentions my name you drop your head in shame/
    All I got without you is my love for the rap game....thats not enough/
    Coz I love you so much....but you've hurt me so I've gotta stand tough/
    I feel locked in a world of hate....like I'm handcuffed/
    I can't break free....All I wanna do is hear you say I love you Lee/
    Mom It's me....your son....please dont abandon me/
    One day you'll see I can make you proud/
    I'm gonna be somebody one day then you can shout my name out loud/
    You can listen to the sound of my voice on a microphone/
    Soon we'll forget all the nightmares of livin in a broken home/
    I cant wait til that day coz right now I feel lonely and alone/
    Mom please call me on me cell phone/
    We patch things up in a hurry/
    I'll make the first move....mom I'm sorry/.


    Explaination:
    Lee - my name
    The rest is self explainitory
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    On the second to last line I was meant to say :
    We need to patch things up in a hurry/

    ^^^I forgot to write need^^^
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    Uppin for feedback.......................................... ................................


    Peace!!!
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    man, i am feeling this peice so much, it is bringing tears to my eyes. but hings will be ok, just give it time. i went through the same things with my mom. But don't let it go too long, you are never garrunteed tomorrow.

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    Yo thanks for the comment man.
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    yo it was a nice peice man, jus keep doin wat ya doin, yo we shud do a collab sum time

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    Yeah sounds good to me. Yo I'll Pm you....got some updates to report.
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    damn, i just have to keep reading it, i'm glad to have gotten in touch with you, or vise versa, whatever, it happened, i got some more things that i can type up for you and email if you want it
    Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason

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    ^^^That makes it sound like he wrote it.
    I wanna announce that this open mic peice is by LM and nobody else.
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    my bad man, i was directiong it toward you though, like i was talking to you, My fault
    Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason

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    No big deal. Besides your ones would be a lot better than that
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    naa man you are better!!!!, I am just trying to get in here
    Fate is inevitable, everything happens for a reason

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    That was my first open mic.
    I'm more of a battler but I open mic is the next step for me....that and my crew
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