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    LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM JEM WINS

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM

    Quote Originally Posted by T.I.M. View Post
    Yeah put me against the best person in here thats not in champs
    Tf happened...



    Boy I asked for a warm up. Jem doesn't have said ability
    Poor fuck bout to get torn up, and still wont have a shred of credibility
    Wow Jem, you look like Kal Penn, without friends, who's all about men
    who wished he moved like Me Too, and cut his dick off to be allowed in
    My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
    Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
    Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
    Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets
    You're stiff as a bus. Spit if you must, yes I'm the best in the league
    & kid you're a bust, so winning's not a statue will ever receive


    Hurry up n take this L
    Last edited by -Coop-; January 20th, 2020 at 05:39 PM Reason: Overkill
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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM

    Ya girl is clinically sick of sexing you… You’re so fucking repulsing
    And when it comes to sucking? She’d rather have another abortion
    That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
    But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
    When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
    Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far
    Dutch coop? That’s splitting your head but if homie talking shit…
    The nina take you out like we in the block chopping bricks
    Your girl sure want’s my nut.. and two seater all I gotta do
    Is knock coops top off and show up in a convertible coupe
    Last edited by JEM.; January 20th, 2020 at 03:11 PM Reason: *Took a bar from my no-show drop - edited Slectht with coop.

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM

    Quote Originally Posted by -Coop- View Post
    Tf happened...



    Boy I asked for a warm up. Jem doesn't have said ability
    Poor fuck bout to get torn up, and still wont have a shred of credibility

    Torn shred eh too easy bro not enough sting to make up for it imo

    Wow Jem, you look like Kal Penn, without friends, who's all about men
    who wished he moved like Me Too, and cut his dick off to be allowed in

    Nahh

    My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
    Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm

    Okish

    Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
    Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets

    This is better. Kind of corny but i fuck w it

    You're stiff as a bus. Spit if you must, yes I'm the best in the league
    & kid you're a bust, so winning's not a statue will ever receive

    Statue is a old wp. Flip isnt bad

    Hurry up n take this L
    Quote Originally Posted by JEM. View Post
    Ya girl is clinically sick of sexing you… You’re so fucking repulsing
    And when it comes to sucking? She’d rather have another abortion

    Lol nahhh

    That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
    But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide

    I like this

    When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
    Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far

    Fire tbh

    Dutch coop? That’s splitting your head but if homie talking shit…
    The nina take you out like we in the block chopping bricks

    Eh i may be missing something but this misses for me

    Your girl sure want’s my nut.. and two seater all I gotta do
    Is knock coops top off and show up in a convertible coupe

    Too easy
    Cool read bros. Im thinking i got jem here with the lotb on the trae young bar. Wording was sloppy but it was by far the most creative concept here and he had like 4 tie ins to go w it. Both had some bad misses.

    Had jem 2-1 on quotes and he had lotb

    V jem


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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    Coop

    My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
    Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
    Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
    Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets

    Highlight of your verse. You had a nice flow.


    Jem
    That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
    But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
    When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
    Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far

    This was the highlight of your verse. The rest of it was cool. I think your last line would have really hit if it was worded differently, it didn’t hit as hard because of that.

    Both emcees had a nice consistent flow. Jem had the best line (reveals her cheating ways like a game guide). Second best line was Coop’s football line.

    Itfelt like you both were chilling. Maybe y’all just make it look effortless with laid back flows.

    Good stuff

    Slight edge to Jem. Vote- JEM

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    Tore up shred has been done but this was delivered alright so ok..
    Kal penn wasnt a good bar
    Garnet line was mild
    Football was cool.. Cant help but think its played like fuck but i cant recall seeing it..just give me that vibe tho
    Statue i thought was cool..
    Vs
    Repulsing/abortion doesnt rhyme for me n thw punch wasnt that good
    Cheating ways was decent bar
    Trae young was pretty nice
    Last two bars werr weak..
    Overall this shit is close..i guess i gotta go with jem for being little fresher amd more creative.. Coop and a nice flow n delivery just needs to work on more sting in his punches
    VOTE JEM

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    Boy I asked for a warm up. Jem doesn't have said ability
    Poor fuck bout to get torn up, and still wont have a shred of credibility
    kinda simple but decent
    Wow Jem, you look like Kal Penn, without friends, who's all about men
    who wished he moved like Me Too, and cut his dick off to be allowed in
    not a fan
    My Apatite's for vets. This guy's a threat? He causes no alarm
    Calls himself Gem with a J, more like, Garnet with a broken arm
    something here im missing.
    Too much sports talk for a pussy nerd that plays Destiny? Yes...
    Bitchin to us cuz a kick in the nuts the one foot-ball connection he gets
    lol i dig this
    You're stiff as a bus. Spit if you must, yes I'm the best in the league
    & kid you're a bust, so winning's not a statue will ever receive
    this is ok

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    Ya girl is clinically sick of sexing you… You’re so fucking repulsing
    And when it comes to sucking? She’d rather have another abortion
    it would be an ok bar if it actually rhymed
    That cunt denies her tricking moves, keeps repeating the same lies
    But put a mag in - & she reveals her cheating ways like a game guide
    cool
    When I point, guards jet… leave you wet no matter where you are
    Cuz I’m money with the trae, young’n & this hawk hits from real far
    diggin it
    Dutch coop? That’s splitting your head but if homie talking shit…
    The nina take you out like we in the block chopping bricks
    not a fan
    Your girl sure want’s my nut.. and two seater all I gotta do
    Is knock coops top off and show up in a convertible coupe
    saying coupe twice ruined this for me. shoulda just said "show up in a convertible" or somethign simple to lose the redundancy

    This is close but i got -coop- with the edge here

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    3-1 jem

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    Lets get a cpuple more votes on this..hate to close at 3-1

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Coop vs JEM VOTE NOW

    coop
    shred of credibility


    jem
    game guide

    basically I liked one bar each from them, the bar I liked from jem was better than the one i liked from coop, the hawk hits from real far that everyone was saying was cool was fucking trash though, but not as bad as the who's all about men bar from coops, coops misses were worse than jem's so I got jem taking this.

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