5 bars
Due Friday by midnight est
@Plata o Plomo
Plata o plomo
Killing spree
5 bars
Due Friday by midnight est
@Plata o Plomo
Expose the trouble between the lines if u choose to cypher w/ a ruthless ryhmer,
showing ya not up to par, kill without advicing nauseous student drivers.
If you're an animal in the game it met its match. when I pop your jaw with a quick jab,
Playing hungry hungry hippos is the only time you gots balls and hit back.
I'll get rid of the fan base till there is no more people that support ya textin,
then my fist be heading for kill; you'd mistake em for medieval torture methods.
Don't bring no buddy to vote, I'll tell to him fall back or he'll get clapped,
no such thing as kill pushin the envelope since the fallen postmen in anthrax mail attacks.
crack fiends like you get no attention even when you're on a rant,
punch will make you herb come off the pipe like I'm ripping off the piranha plant
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Last edited by Spree; September 25th, 2015 at 06:10 PM
See...
Im servin surgery W/These guns. Make sure this Lame see's it
Cos I'll cook n clear Plata & leave the Tre covered in Brain pieces
Ya last battle was a lesson, But this degree has ya Pain doubled
You aint book or street smart, & It Shows you Deff aint up to Aye Level
put a red dot on ya head, If i spaz? I'll dead the Newb quick
& Ya Temp'll Cool down...seconds after I shoot some lead through it
ya time to be alive is on the edge, I'll show this wack the new work
Cos if you thinkin you'll Jump,man.. I'll make sure u dont Have a Future
I got them quiet crack bars, Nothing screams about ya Rhymes, dude
If we hear a Loud POP! its ya neck after i sneak up behind you
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Last edited by Spree; September 28th, 2015 at 07:42 PM
[QUOTE=Plata o Plomo;8749053]Expose the trouble between the lines if u choose to cypher w/ a ruthless ryhmer,
showing ya not up to par, kill without advicing nauseous student drivers.
Ur setup has nothing to do with nauseous student drivers, it feels random 'between the lines' isn't enough to justify the student driver part. Because you finished with cypher/rhymer
If you're an animal in the game it met its match. when I pop your jaw with a quick jab,
Playing hungry hungry hippos is the only time you gots balls and hit back.
corny, the way you worded this punch came off corny. The idea behind this was comical, but the way you wrote this was bad.
I'll get rid of the fan base till there is no more people that support ya textin,
then my fist be heading for kill; you'd mistake em for medieval torture methods.
No, You really need to set these concepts up.
Don't bring no buddy to vote, I'll tell to him fall back or he'll get clapped,
no such thing as kill pushin the envelope since the fallen postmen in anthrax mail attacks.
No, anthrax/mail stuff is so old.
crack fiends like you get no attention even when you're on a rant,
punch will make you herb come off the pipe like I'm ripping off the piranha plant
I really don't like how you word your bars, man.
v/KSOriginally Posted by Killing Spree
Plata you came off very corny most of the time. Its like your new to this or very rusty and are trying to adapt in modern times. You have creative thoughts you just choose played concepts and poor wording. The way you word your punchlines comes off at a Jab at best. Your set ups are damn near pure filler, because it doesn't support your punchline. If it does its just worded bad. You will get better, if I can improve you damn sure can make leaps and bounds. Don't get discouraged a lot of people have a terrible way of giving advice. They mainly call you whack without telling you how to improve on what they dislike about your bars.
3TC
you look depressed as fuck in video mags, your fate is unfurled
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[QUOTE=Clout;8752689]Thanks for the feedback homie. @Clout
plata
Expose the trouble between the lines if u choose to cypher w/ a ruthless ryhmer,
showing ya not up to par, kill without advicing nauseous student drivers.
gotta agree here ur setup wasn't relevant to the finisher
If you're an animal in the game it met its match. when I pop your jaw with a quick jab,
Playing hungry hungry hippos is the only time you gots balls and hit back.
this was a good attempt but wording hurt u.
I'll get rid of the fan base till there is no more people that support ya textin,
then my fist be heading for kill; you'd mistake em for medieval torture methods.
gotta fix the wording here
Don't bring no buddy to vote, I'll tell to him fall back or he'll get clapped,
no such thing as kill pushin the envelope since the fallen postmen in anthrax mail attacks.
again too wordy
crack fiends like you get no attention even when you're on a rant,
punch will make you herb come off the pipe like I'm ripping off the piranha plant
nah wording
U have the attempts Plata just have to execute the wording better here.
KS
Im servin surgery W/These guns. Make sure this Lame see's it
Cos I'll cook n clear Plata & leave the Tre covered in Brain pieces
nice nameplay and direct punch
Ya last battle was a lesson, But this degree has ya Pain doubled
You aint book or street smart, & It Shows you Deff aint up to Aye Level
could've executed this better and the rhyme scheme was off
put a red dot on ya head, If i spaz? I'll dead the Newb quick
& Ya Temp'll Cool down...seconds after I shoot some lead through it
dope wordplay
ya time to be alive is on the edge, I'll show this wack the new work
Cos if you thinkin you'll Jump,man.. I'll make sure u dont Have a Future
felt this wordplay could've been executed better
I got them quiet crack bars, Nothing screams about ya Rhymes, dude
If we hear a Loud POP! its ya neck after i sneak up behind you
direct hit
Killing Spree had this comfortably he was overall just more creative and more direct with his punches. Plata like I said ur idea for attempts was there man but u executed them poorly with wording. U Focused a lot on basic nameplays that were complete misses.
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Expose the trouble between the lines if u choose to cypher w/ a ruthless ryhmer,
showing ya not up to par, kill without advicing nauseous student drivers.
i dont get it..
If you're an animal in the game it met its match. when I pop your jaw with a quick jab,
Playing hungry hungry hippos is the only time you gots balls and hit back.
nah weak and old
I'll get rid of the fan base till there is no more people that support ya textin,
then my fist be heading for kill; you'd mistake em for medieval torture methods.
nah
Don't bring no buddy to vote, I'll tell to him fall back or he'll get clapped,
no such thing as kill pushin the envelope since the fallen postmen in anthrax mail attacks.
decent attempt but wording hurt it
crack fiends like you get no attention even when you're on a rant,
punch will make you herb come off the pipe like I'm ripping off the piranha plant
lol no man
vs
See...
Im servin surgery W/These guns. Make sure this Lame see's it
Cos I'll cook n clear Plata & leave the Tre covered in Brain pieces
decent
Ya last battle was a lesson, But this degree has ya Pain doubled
You aint book or street smart, & It Shows you Deff aint up to Aye Level
alright cool
put a red dot on ya head, If i spaz? I'll dead the Newb quick
& Ya Temp'll Cool down...seconds after I shoot some lead through it
wouldnt the temp go up? lol good wp but didnt connect for me
ya time to be alive is on the edge, I'll show this wack the new work
Cos if you thinkin you'll Jump,man.. I'll make sure u dont Have a Future
ehh forced
I got them quiet crack bars, Nothing screams about ya Rhymes, dude
If we hear a Loud POP! its ya neck after i sneak up behind you
cool
This battle was very one sided here, plata needs to work on concepts and wording. KS had some good bars in there so he gets the win.
Vote/ KS
3-0 uppin
Hungry hippos
Vs
Opener, Aye level, kinda liked the closer
V/Killing Spree... More punch oriented verse. Playa has potential. Must be a topical head tryna switch to text. At least that's what I got from it
If you're an animal in the game it met its match. when I pop your jaw with a quick jab,
Playing hungry hungry hippos is the only time you gots balls and hit back.
vs.
Ya last battle was a lesson, But this degree has ya Pain doubled
You aint book or street smart, & It Shows you Deff aint up to Aye Level
I got them quiet crack bars, Nothing screams about ya Rhymes, dude
If we hear a Loud POP! its ya neck after i sneak up behind you
Weakkkkk!!!!
KS barely beat this guy BARELY, on purpose. And Plata you gotta stop making all these battles dawg.
You're losing every single last one. It's crazy yooo lmao. The concepts by Plata are underdeveloped & punches that do connect are too soft to make a difference.
Vote: Killing Spree
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