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leave links and I'll rtf..
[sc]http://soundcloud.com/chi-money/hold-on-tight[/sc]
leave links and I'll rtf..
Last edited by The Gwapfather; October 8th, 2011 at 04:13 PM
Nice man, one of your best tracks yet.. your flow is 97% good, a few spots were a little bit off but with each song you improve big time. Beat was dope, lyrics too, great song
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really diggin this beat. lyrics are dope. flow is right on. if you through some hypes in the hook i think it would bring the track together a lil more, but thats being picky famm this is hot. 2nd verse is ill. Fire man. Multi's are dope, i really like how comfy you sound. dammit i thought a third verse was gonna drop HARD after the switch up at the end #sadface.
dope drop man, wished you had another 16.
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beat is a little trippy, sounds good though
delivery is hard
flow seems like its on point for the most part, only off a little at times when your switching it up
vocals sound like they might be a little low, but i can't really tell with the speakers im using
anyways good track fam keep at it
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I'm feelin this track man. Flow is nice in my opinion. Lyrics are cool. I'm feelin the beat too. Keep doin you.
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Dope beat. Feeling the realness in the lyrics man, respect. Either your vocals could have been upped a little in the first verse - Or you just not putting enough emphasis into what you're saying man. Second verse kills the track - You got into it... The hook had a nice vibe going on, I suggest you leave it as such.
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The Beat is different but Nice. You ride the track nicely.
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Beat has a nice bounce to it
was rockin to it and your flow
nice
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You got some flow here. Beat is alright, kind of melodic. Your lyrics compliment the swagger kind of flow you have, that chorus is definitely trippy/creepy even haha. Maybe add something to it, feels like its missing something. Some classic late 2k's style, newschool. All in all, decent drop here man, props.
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Yeah i wanted to hear another 16 too, very dope shit here bruh, beat had me in instant nod mode, hook could have been spiced up a little bit, but very too dope nonetheless, flow is real dope, but could've been better, punchlines were on point, i like this track bro
9/10
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