MrSick Vs Swift Shiftee

[MrSick]

10 lines
Blind Spit
House rules

[MrSick]

Little man just wants to battle theres nothing he everr never settle's
bet not ignore,ass getin tore Swift Shifty pickn up whore`s still tryn a score of your pedtles
give him a meddle, he wants to explore watch him straight sag it bling bling exclusive
be awrded for repn a lil faget conclusive contrebusive producive
of the all ready used when he thinks he wity
its like a fusion somewere between a thin line of Beyonce n 50ity
little bit shity that you still learning to write a line as your tryn
man dont be lyn wile geting schooled i bet behind the screen your cryn
or drop down a sad brown looking stained wack entary
the shit lacks slacks dont bring, jack,it back n the back pack its elementary

[Swift Shiftee]

Check.

[Swift Shiftee]

I'mma put this man in a body bag... with 2 bars dammit.

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Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder
But when it comes to bein' shit, he's the first rapper I'd invest in
It's clear the dude mastered the art, of rapping from the small intestine

[HighTheory]

uh.. whack vs. lines
ittle man just wants to battle theres nothing he everr never settle's
bet not ignore,ass getin tore Swift Shifty pickn up whore`s still tryn a score of your pedtles
give him a meddle, he wants to explore watch him straight sag it bling bling exclusive
be awrded for repn a lil faget conclusive contrebusive producive
of the all ready used when he thinks he wity
its like a fusion somewere between a thin line of Beyonce n 50ity
little bit shity that you still learning to write a line as your tryn
man dont be lyn wile geting schooled i bet behind the screen your cryn
or drop down a sad brown looking stained wack entary
the shit lacks slacks dont bring, jack,it back n the back pack its elementary
i see what your doing, nice multies, and the rest, problem is your punches arent really connecting, simple insults wont do in a vs battle, didint see any personals on the guy

Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder
But when it comes to bein' shit, he's the first rapper I'd invest in
It's clear the dude mastered the art, of rapping from the small intestine
started ok, i actully thought you were goign to bag him, but it kinda feel off with the second verse, but a punch in both versus, so i
V- Swift

[The Phantom...]

mrsick

Little man just wants to battle theres nothing he everr never settle's
bet not ignore,ass getin tore Swift Shifty pickn up whore`s still tryn a score of your pedtles
miss
give him a meddle, he wants to explore watch him straight sag it bling bling exclusive
be awrded for repn a lil faget conclusive contrebusive producive
nah
of the all ready used when he thinks he wity
its like a fusion somewere between a thin line of Beyonce n 50ity
nah
little bit shity that you still learning to write a line as your tryn
man dont be lyn wile geting schooled i bet behind the screen your cryn
nah
or drop down a sad brown looking stained wack entary
the shit lacks slacks dont bring, jack,it back n the back pack its elementary
nah

vs

swift shiftee

Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder
weak
But when it comes to bein' shit, he's the first rapper I'd invest in
It's clear the dude mastered the art, of rapping from the small intestine
weak

verdict

wack battle. but i'd take shiftee's 2 weak jabs over sicks whole verse which were a bunch of statement type bars with no punch involved.

u need to structure your shit better, get creative but i think its better to work on your flow for now cause its all over the place.

for the obvious better verse minus the the 3 bars..

vote-> swift shiftee

[#PrimeTime]

nothin

vs.

Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder
But when it comes to bein' shit, he's the first rapper I'd invest in
It's clear the dude mastered the art, of rapping from the small intestine

Swifts 2 bars were better than mr. sicks whole verse, which surprises the hell outta me... mr. sick come up with better concepts and creativity. And swift, dont do that again.

v - swift

[Flash]

nada

VS

Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder
But when it comes to bein' shit, he's the first rapper I'd invest in
It's clear the dude mastered the art, of rapping from the small intestine

ehh weak battles, but the 2 bars were enuff to give Swift the win. Sick was just rambling about stuff.

v-Swift

[Swift Shiftee]

Ha-ha! Uppin'.

[Skepto]

the fuck FL this is where were putting our shit now you all just pretty much stated that these two do not need to elevate...the guy who actually put in work is losing the guy with two terrible lines of like two min shit bars and a bunch of numbers

first off this isnt a hate vote this is just garbage how is this guy mr. whatever gonna elevate or want to elevate if he loses to someone how did 2/5ths of what he was supposed to? and swift i fuckin think your gay as aids inside a monkey whos getting butt fucked in a tent with the guys from brokeback mountain either way the fact that you wrote two bars makes my job easy to read it but how are you ever gonna get better and i mean it when i say you need to elevate i mean im rusty as fuck and would flawless you

this pisses me off

two played concepts 10 min worth of work vs. major elevation needed but put in the work for the right amount lines..

v/ Mr.Sick for actually doing what he was supposed to

[Caiyo]

Everything MrSick writes is piss poor, call him the broke bladder
His wack bars couldn't send his rank up, if they were attached to a ladder


vs

nothing


both weak, both poor, both swagless..and with that being sed i vote for swift cause of his avy i mean its hidiously funny, naw but really weak battle...wift atually landed a decent punch i guess.
vote=ss

[A.T.]

No links... No win