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    Narrow Grave

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    Dublin, Ireland
    1824

    And so it commenced...

    As the wolves' full moon donated an unprecedented glow
    Ripples shivered across ponds from the implemented cold
    One throat panted fog into the swarms of mist that roamed
    And two eyes stared blankly into the ditch, shy of bones
    The male delinquent rested a palm onto a spades handle
    And tendered to his aching back under his grey mantle
    With temperatures below zero, there was fear of frostbite
    A graverobber ignorant of what a decomposed body's like
    He resumed the uninvited diggin of an innocent corpse
    Casting aside shovels of dirt, since he lived with discord
    Expressing nothin but scorn, he made contact with a coffin
    Descended into the depths and grabbed a pickaxe for the robbin
    By the side of him, a Kerosene lantern faintly burnt
    Just enough source to visualize the nails in the dirt
    And wretched open the lid to release a scent of disease
    The stench had him chokin and heavin, clenchin his sleeve
    After a moments pause, he began rummaging the remains
    Seeking for items of value that could be exchanged
    Swiped what he could cradle and placed them onto the Earth
    Pulled himself out of the grave and then calmed his nerves
    Gazed around the woodlands... Gasped and yelled in anguish
    Due to the sudden jerk, he backstepped and fell into the pit
    Frantically puffed his lungs, saw to his side what was next
    A maggot infested body glarin back at him in detest
    He rose from the ground, so it was duty to wither and die
    Clawed his nails whilst bein looked upon a sinister smile
    Stared death in the eyes, maybe even literally that night
    In horror, was paralyzed, a newly captured prisoner confined
    Facing the moon, he wish it had given him some guidance
    But his capillaries constricted, body resisted defiance
    .....
    Time passed by and what remained were frozen bones decayed
    Like his blood vessels, he met his fate in a Narrow Grave


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    Re: Narrow Grave

    ?.............

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    Re: Narrow Grave

    tight shit bro...keep it up

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