10-14 lines
due an hour after check in
no d/r or hate votes
no unexplained votes be counted
good luck.....
10-14 lines
due an hour after check in
no d/r or hate votes
no unexplained votes be counted
good luck.....
checkin
Chheckkkiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
G-luck Homieeeeee
good match laziee ill b watchin...
g/l both yall i dont mean 2 freepost, but jus thought id say dat
'Chaeta
Now u THink u got this won? its time to make a decision/
Cause ill run this rap battle with militry precision/2
When u set out on this sh*t it was a pointless endeavor/3
my rhmyes are timeless like i bin writin them forever/4
Ill act like ur teacher cause i was brought up a class act/5
step out of line and ill shuv a ruler up ur ass crack/6
Face it boy ur whack u aint got nuttin against me/7
ur a disgrace to hip hop, u call urself an emcee?/8
I act like ronaldo, my beats will try and rape you**/9
and watch as i begin to lyrically annihalate you/10
Ur stupid, dum, dim, fake, dense/11
u want my reasons? cause ur rymhes dnt make sense/12
Now its time for me to end your delusion/13
b4 it started this battlehad reached its conclusion/14
.!. dONE wIT cHU .!.
IIGHT JOriginally Posted by jhood_bobericc
BY THE WAY U CAN DROP A HONEST VOTE IF U WANT 2,
N U WON OUR BATTLE
SOO GOOD LUCK WIT THE OTHER BATTLES
this bitch be depressed,not a factor of mean sprays(spits),
all suicidal,his wrists got more cuts than actors in screen plays,
this dawgs a deemed stray,
as ya bringing the weak beef,i'll throw ya in the cooler till ya toes freeze!,
hoe please,you all stuttering be like ya flows have seized,
but yea bro you are dope!!!.....caus your skill does "grow on tree's",
this hoes all "washed up" buying soap on the dole(money 4 not working),
be "lazy" sitting on the couch,fuck your a dope and mole,
cause only time you pushing anyones buttons is wen you reach 4 tha remote control!,
but change the channel,stop watching birds fly and get ya "head out of the clouds",
your completely shit!!!!, so i'll have to do more than "shred ya bowel",
but face it you'll never succeed for the fame and wealth,
your such a loser,it's lame to tell,can't figure out what to call you,but guess you got so many aliases you can't even name yaself
>>over<< some quick shit....and tha alias bit....swear you pain text style same and all....all the remote control shit just bagging your name...lazy peace
IIGHT UPPPINNN FOR VOTEZ
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by the way i dunno pain !
some lines came out different in my verse...had no intention on exceeding 14...daym i cut punches out so it would fit....drop two more lines if you wanna bro...honestly didnt mean for that...thanks jhood drop a vote bruv....nice drop btw
check pains profile....sig text style the !!!! its exact...haha daym coincidence.
okok...
kilamc- ya shyt was ok, u need 2 elevate on ur punches tho...alot. i feel u los this bit, bcuz of ur structure 2
laziee- u fixed ur structure good.. nice punches, good vocab.. all in all u came harder in this situation
drop an honest vote or jus upp it for me, id appritiate it
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=246003&page=1
v/ laziee
'Chaeta
what a fuck u talkin boute? pains profile
who tha fuck iz pain
don't worry no big deal.....it's over with now shhhh!! and wait for votes
yooo fuck that nigga i dont know pain i swear,
but u can call this what ever u want
uuuuuupppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn x2
kilamc-you need to work on structure big time, but i feel ya punches hit harder, and ya metaphores were doepr
lazzie-you had better structure and flow, ya puns hit decent and your personals were better..this was ur battle
v//lazzie
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