Topic: Adolescent Pain
Concept: Going through Shyt as a teen
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Topic: Adolescent Pain
Concept: Going through Shyt as a teen
check 5 min
blind spyt due in one hour
good luck
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yo, where is the poll?
THE FAMILY.
never mind i see it now.... check in...................
THE FAMILY.
It's there...Shyt be Delayed..............................
Someone drop a vote in my battle, and I'll vote here when its time..thanks...vote and I'll vote, simple.
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here go my shit, hope ya'll enjoy this.....
Angel had three kids living in a crack house on her own
boyfriend she was in love with for four years left her alone
she running the streetz fuckin and suckin each and every dude she meet
fed up on drug pills so is her kids cant even give them one bite to eat
hit holes in the walls at sixteen her parents threw her out the door
caught Chlamydia two weeks later, the whole family didnt notice er anymore
got four different pimps she was in all strip clubs getting raped
three niggaz fucked her around her kids even had er video taped
stayed on crack for a while until her bones showed out the skin
cousins of hers been making her suck their dicks since she was nine and ten
diagnosed wit HIV sicknesses coming to her body outta control
life was devastating wanted to jump off the bridge and end her soul
no money to own sleepless nights she went through all to her self
right beside er, her 3 month baby died of AIDS dificiency health
put the blades to her skin ripped and put her skin to a nasty shred
entered her mothers job frail and pail then dropped lifelessly to her death bed
THE FAMILY.
Young girl lost runs wild in da streets her ma ain't seen her for weeks
When da cops showed up it made her heart skip a beat
dey say dey found a girls body and need identification
her minds racin.........
cuz da lst fight dey had
told her little girl she hated her cuz she was mixed races
But what was she to do act like she never seen her free basin?
She only 17 wit 3 kids and under her roof iz where dey reside
Hell naw she wasn't wrong when she grabbed her by da collar
and threw her ass outside
dat night she cried cuz she knew what he was doing to her baby
and still she didn't lift a finger to save her chose her face delusion of a family
She looks through da glass at her daughters bloody tattered body
and da autopsy would reveal she was pregnant by her daddy................
now she haunted by her daughters words "ma why ain't u save me?"
sorry took so long had to feed my son
[B]and still she didn't lift a finger to save her chose her fake delusion of a family[/FDI
DIS IS WHAT I MENT TO SAY...MY BAD
uppin 4 votes............................................. ....
v/ ladiestreetz for much more complexity.. betta structure and flow and story
Open Mics
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Poetry
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Last Word
Twizteds Bodyguards
Quotes HOF
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Originally Posted by Vamp.
ladi streetz was more on topics, and i prefered her choice of words more, her vocab was overall better, i think the rhyme scheme was bad from blessed tongue. this was a lil obvious. v/ ladi streetz.
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awight..........uppin............................. ..............
both wuz tight as hell to me...go hea d ladiez do ya thing
Ms.Bellaire
thank my mama
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thnaks ms bellaire... i never really seen you, so hello....
uppin
THE FAMILY.
uppin this
THE FAMILY.