12-15 lines
Do by midnight tonight
U spit first
12-15 lines
Do by midnight tonight
U spit first
Are you going to spit? It's past midnight but we can still battles
yeah man ill spit now....
ur neither SUARVE NOR SOPHISTICATED/u a no talent bitch u gonna get SLATED..
im gonna make it my PURPOSE/2 expose ur shit as WORTHLESS
im da kid u FEAR AND RESPECT/get fucked on WEED AND BEER then BREAK YA NECK
this aint no CLASH OF DA TITANS/its ur SHIT LINES v TIGHT-UNS
u suckinn' DICKS 4 CASH/u scared u should b QUICK 2 DASH/i'll WHIP UR ASS/u MCEE NEVA-LAST
real mcees dont feel UR SHIT/u a fag neva seen a CLIT NOR A TIT
u will always LIVE IN POVERTY/respect me bitch, ERIC CARTMAN SAID THIS.."RESPECT MY AUTHORITY"
like in american history x ill have u bitin DA KURB MAN/u avoid hot lines they should call u mc WOA SWERVE MAN!
im like a PROFESSOR OF PHYSICS/wit my INTELLIGENT LYRICS/a dark BRAIN that shoots fake MCEES out tha GAME/u TAME and LAME never have FOURTUNE AND FAME
OVER AND OUT/u got fucked in the ass so BEND OVER AND SHOUT............
this dudes offline i should get this vote man
U say u should get the vote because when u finally spit I was offline
But I set the battle up yesterday, u the one who's past the deadline
U said my shit would be worthless, u say I'll be slated
U said I ain't never seen no pussy then u ended the rhyme with some gay shit
Nigga I'll never give you respect, u aint Aretha, u don't have half her sense
Go get fucked off your weed and beer 'cause it's obvious you rapping under the influence
Of course this not a clash of the titans, you rap like a ho me a pimp
Rather an underwater food cycle how a whale of a rapper is eating you shrimp
U can't even fuck with me with writtens so think if we were freestylin in person
They'll think I was Brian Nichols in the Atlanta courthouse the way I'll be murkin
Never will see poverty even if I gotta push more keys/kis than in a parking lot
And I won't lose even if my gun gotta leave yo head the way u finished yo rhyme, dot, dot, dot
uppin
Uppin for votes, homies, shawties, niggas, bitches, whatever, just vote
Somebody please vote!!!!!!!Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!Somebody vote!!!!!!!!!!Shawty please vote!!!!!!!!!!
at the looks of things real close battle both mc's could have came harder but mcbc had better punches and so my vote goes his way
Vote:MCBC
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MCBC took it.
All suave did was bite off of BC's. WHich is pussy AND bullshit....AND he didn't even do a good job of using BC's verse either.
Flow=MCBC
Originality-MCBC
Punches=MCBC
Multies=MCBC
Intro=MCBC
Outro=MCBC
first off, i cant give feedback on either guys verse............
simply because theyre structure is twisted,
homie ya need to not use the slashes in your verse...........
even up your lines, so it rhymes evenly
work on your sylllable count,
work on your personals
work on your multis..................
suave man you started out ok, but then you drifted off, and then you completely lost my attention,
should have stayed w/ your original concept of structure..................
that endn was really, abore, not to sound harsh homie, but work on it.......
elevate...........
my v/------------suave man, begginning of his verse was better than the othe guys overall verse............
but both need to elevate alot, work on it all, youll get there homies...........1
rtf
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