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    Some well earned dissing...

    I’m a little bit pissed at these fuckin little kids…
    Tryin ta tell me something, like I answer to this.
    You wish! Shit, I’m an old fool but not your fool…
    So don’t tell me what to do if ya ass still in school.
    Or if ya needy for a CD then you best believe me…
    Your opinion is shit cuz ya dead to me like Weezy!
    Fuckin greedy! Little bitches even steal to rise…
    Cuz they got no substance…between their thighs.
    Or in they rhymes, but fuckin fakes still assassinate…
    Cuz friends in high places don’t care if they elevate.
    So hate me all you want, you jealous fuckin brats…
    You know and I know you’ll never make a splash.
    Never get noticed, never get fame…………and I’d…
    Mention you personally, but I already forgot ya name!
    Take advice from the old guy, learn from the wiser…
    You couldn’t be dope if you changed ya name to Pfizer.
    And kiss my ass on the judging, I know kids’ll rate…
    This verse as a zero…….like their number of dates!
    Forked tongue phoneys gather round for praise…
    Cuz circle-jerk fags shoot accolades for days.
    And it stays, staining each and every post they make…
    Cuz each and every word can easily be proven fake.
    Like steak, they bite, but now I smash the airhole…
    And make em feel the crunch like Pinky Tuscadero.
    Cuz not a single one of you, in my eyes, is better…
    You simply saturate votes like ya do ya bed…wetter.
    Maybe way back, you cats outdid me in rap…
    But I’ve come to learn this is a whole different craft.
    This shit ain’t hip hop, it ain’t industry at all…
    This shit’s just writing…now read the writing on the wall!
    It says ya mostly the same, not near one of a kind…
    So ya weak in the heart as well as your mind.
    It says you ain’t what you wanna be, and it kills you inside…
    So you envy this grown man, living satisfied.
    It says you ain’t even fucked yet, you virgin bore…
    And again, I’d mention ya names…
    But you know who the fuck you are, whores.


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    Last edited by Born To Kill; September 10th, 2004 at 01:47 PM

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    hahahaha.. BTK at it again.. this shit was hard.. flow was on-point.. some funny shit man.. i dunno who made you get pissed, but they shouldn't have.. you just ended their e-career w/ one drop.. this shit was ugly in a good way, lol..

    Never get noticed, never get fame…………and I’d…
    Mention you personally, but I already forgot ya name!

    And kiss my ass on the judging, I know kids’ll rate…
    This verse as a zero…….like their number of dates!
    Forked tongue phoneys gather round for praise…
    Cuz circle-jerk fags shoot accolades for days.

    Like steak, they bite, but now I smash the airhole…
    And make em feel the crunch like Pinky Tuscadero.

    ^^ God damn.. nasty.. nasty as fuck.

    Keep this up.. n' get @ me for a collab =). Pz.

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    thats a tight flow but ya opener wasnt all that
    but read on it was arite comin at ya styles
    bust a rhyme flow...

    Maybe way back, you cats outdid me in rap…
    But I’ve come to learn this is a whole different craft.

    nice ^

    Take advice from the old guy, learn from the wiser…
    You couldn’t be dope if you changed ya name to Pfizer.

    dope ^

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    i wasnt feeling it, BTK there was a few line that were coo, but I didnt really like it..
    i usually like ur disses/battles/overall pieces, but I wasnt feelin it, keep at it...
    peace

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    ay yo i kno im prolly a lil kid ta u an u prolly see me da same way u talkin in yo piece but dat was tight, got skill an ma respects ~ keep doin wha u do ~ 1 ~

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    Thank you, everyone...

    For the feedback.

    Peace

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    "And kiss my ass on the judging, I know kids’ll rate…
    This verse as a zero…….like their number of dates!
    Forked tongue phoneys gather round for praise…
    Cuz circle-jerk fags shoot accolades for days.
    And it stays, staining each and every post they make…
    Cuz each and every word can easily be proven fake."

    Some of the dopest lines from the whole verse^.

    LOL, second line is a pre-meditated thought directed to Viscosity. Just kidding.
    Good ass flow as always with nice transitions and a smooth, buttery flow. Nothing of multies which could have been a very nicely used, but this was straight to the point. No internals either which would have been more equipped for a deep piece than this, I suppose.
    Good fuckin metaphors/similies in this bitch.
    "Or in they rhymes, but fuckin fakes still assassinate…
    Cuz friends in high places don’t care if they elevate."

    Some lines proved to be dull filler though, and a little more filler from you than usual. Fine though.
    Writer's voice was strong of course, with a good diss. Dunno what else. Please hit up my collab with Sublime in my siggy or the OM I'm about to drop. Thank you and Peace.
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    This was iight I've seen alot better from you but like I said this was "iight". Keep droppin!!!!!!!!

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    gud man, very gud. I really want to know who this is about know.

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    I'm feelin' it. I see where you're comming from!
    From the start to the end you've mentioned wack kids hating.
    It wasn't one of the best pieces I've read from you,
    but it was a good one, nothing you write is bad.
    I've learned to write better from your open mics.
    So keep em commin'
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    LMAO at this man, good shit, funny shit, but real at the same time. For what it is a diss, I liked it man, you have this way of keeping me interested. Makes me want to drop a diss verse now...

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    True nice job BTK on this alot of truth behind it and what not.

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    Yo Who Piseed U Off Old Man???????????????lol Yo Get At Nme For A Collab Like Back In The Day
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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