10 lines, whoever can go first, verses due by 11:59 Pm eastern no crew, dr/ etc votes, gluck 1luv.
Foreshadow
Da NFamous
10 lines, whoever can go first, verses due by 11:59 Pm eastern no crew, dr/ etc votes, gluck 1luv.
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Checking In... Good Luck...
You just opened the jaws of a venomous demon who leave enemies fiendin~
Render the most powerful opponent powerless when i enter the schemin~
Son you dont know what i do to kin shoot him so that he lose a win~
i can look in fore's shadow and tell that his futures dim~
unload and slaughter ya team father this emcee have you farther then deceased~
from living so forget about spittin dont even bother to breathe~
end ya career at the wave of a paw you aint ever made or raw~
i'll enslave ya bars then leave ya nose bleedin like u emulated ya avatar~
Leave you knowin pain no novocane can stop i've shot any foe in range~
im so insane and i foreshadowed i would slap this black around like Canada's favorite frozen game~
remember, feeding is
1luv.
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Are you crazy D! trying to be thuggin when he speaks. but unlike me, you aint crazy enuff
I'll knock you off your feet, You be like beyonce.. huggin da streets like u 'Crazy-In-Love'
criminal type, I win lyrical fights. u'll explode like a banger.. straight-up I'm a felon
lose your head.. because itz like my punches are sledge hammers and your head is a melon
so my spraks give you a lot more than head aches.. I'm what it takes to be great
what? u want beef? ok, I' fix u a plate.. my lifes a success. your's is pear-shape
you dont wanna be steppin to me. because ill step on your face like a staircase
so Nfamous, before you try anyting stupid or crazy…u best think about your fate
Think twice. because we bring weapons that'll be scaring your face and be bruising your ego
you got dotted hope, but your a weaklin so u have to watch your back like u just dropped the soap
aight great now we got both verses, time to get them votes, 1luv.
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You just opened the jaws of a venomous demon who leave enemies fiendin~
Render the most powerful opponent powerless when i enter the schemin~
bragging nothing good
Son you dont know what i do to kin shoot him so that he lose a win~
i can look in fore's shadow and tell that his futures dim~
tight punch i liekd this one
unload and slaughter ya team father this emcee have you farther then deceased~
from living so forget about spittin dont even bother to breathe~
didn't really like this
end ya career at the wave of a paw you aint ever made or raw~
i'll enslave ya bars then leave ya nose bleedin like u emulated ya avatar~
personal...coo
Leave you knowin pain no novocane can stop i've shot any foe in range~
im so insane and i foreshadowed i would slap this black around like Canada's favorite frozen game
some more bragggin wit a lil wordplay
Are you crazy D! trying to be thuggin when he speaks. but unlike me, you aint crazy enuff
I'll knock you off your feet, You be like beyonce.. huggin da streets like u 'Crazy-In-Love'
hahaha
criminal type, I win lyrical fights. u'll explode like a banger.. straight-up I'm a felon
lose your head.. because itz like my punches are sledge hammers and your head is a melon
average
so my spraks give you a lot more than head aches.. I'm what it takes to be great
what? u want beef? ok, I' fix u a plate.. my lifes a success. your's is pear-shape
no...
you dont wanna be steppin to me. because ill step on your face like a staircase
so Nfamous, before you try anyting stupid or crazy…u best think about your fate
filler
Think twice. because we bring weapons that'll be scaring your face and be bruising your ego
you got dotted hope, but your a weaklin so u have to watch your back like u just dropped the soap
meh... arlight finisher
My vote goes to the nfamous cuz of his personals and i liked more of his punches. I broke it down honestly so can u please vote on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139334
^thanks for the vote, elevation is key.......1luv.
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foreshadow- i wasn't feelin your flow man, punches were aight, but could have been better. decent structure though.
famous- i liked your shit, it had a good flow and creative punches. structure was also good.
v/ famous, better overall verse.
hit up my battles, the link is in my sig. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
2-0 ^....
ehh not too hard of a battle.
both came with a pretty bad structure... need to work on
that a bit... punches i think famous takes that category
just had more that hit harder in my opinion... same goes
with personals and wordplay... shadow you need to work
on some of your punches .. on how to word them
or the set up cause i just wasnt feelin em... which is
why i vote for Famous.
V/ Da NFamous
return the favor...i will poll when its done... im sick of
voting on peoples battles and leaving links and my shit
still gets sleept on for 4 - 5 days
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=139589
pz
^responded to your battle, i hate when that shit happens too so lets see some votes!, 1luv.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=139417....can u pllllzzz return the favor in that slept on battle......
nfamous
You just opened the jaws of a venomous demon who leave enemies fiendin~
Render the most powerful opponent powerless when i enter the schemin~
6/10...nuttin here, jus talkin
Son you dont know what i do to kin shoot him so that he lose a win~
i can look in fore's shadow and tell that his futures dim~
7/10...nice play off his name, although i seen this one comin..
unload and slaughter ya team father this emcee have you farther then deceased~
from living so forget about spittin dont even bother to breathe~
7/10...liked it...
end ya career at the wave of a paw you aint ever made or raw~
i'll enslave ya bars then leave ya nose bleedin like u emulated ya avatar~
[b]6/10...his avvys not bleedin, but u used my name....word.
Leave you knowin pain no novocane can stop i've shot any foe in range~
im so insane and i foreshadowed i would slap this black around like Canada's favorite frozen game~
7/10...nice punch
overall - 6.6...had some good punches in here, but u lacked personals...
Foreshadow
Are you crazy D! trying to be thuggin when he speaks. but unlike me, you aint crazy enuff
I'll knock you off your feet, You be like beyonce.. huggin da streets like u 'Crazy-In-Love'
6/10...wasnt really a punch, beyonce didnt hug the street...
criminal type, I win lyrical fights. u'll explode like a banger.. straight-up I'm a felon
lose your head.. because itz like my punches are sledge hammers and your head is a melon
6.5/10...couldve used it better...the melon/sledge hammer killed it
so my spraks give you a lot more than head aches.. I'm what it takes to be great
what? u want beef? ok, I' fix u a plate.. my lifes a success. your's is pear-shape
5/10...wut?
you dont wanna be steppin to me. because ill step on your face like a staircase
so Nfamous, before you try anyting stupid or crazy…u best think about your fate
6/10...no punch, weak
Think twice. because we bring weapons that'll be scaring your face and be bruising your ego
you got dotted hope, but your a weaklin so u have to watch your back like u just dropped the soap
5/10...no
overall - 5.7...weak spit...punches were soft...
v/nfamous
can u guys plz return the favor...dont forget
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Thanks for the response and just to clarify, he changed his avatar, thanks again for the response, and i'll be sure to respond with an honest vote, 1luv.
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Alright come on lets get these votes i promise to drop an honest reply to your battle if u return the favor and drop an honest vote in this one, 1luv.
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