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    Bloody tears-

    I've been hoping for many years that one day my world won't turn 'round/
    But this can't be how shit's gone go down//

    Not me drowning in my secrets, forever wanting pleasure/
    Not being a go getter knowing i can do better//

    I'm in a city where u hustle to be a pimp, and pimping's the hustle/
    Where you might last in the streets alone, but not for long without muscle//

    Na' i ain't saying my everyday's a struggle, but its always a tussle/
    And my world keeps spining eventhough beneath me it feels as if it's gone crumble//

    -REFRAIN-

    Nah i'm a be a man
    I'ma do what i gotta/
    I'ma be a man
    Whatever I do make sho'its done proper/
    And i'ma be man
    Till the last day i stand
    cause since my life begain God had a plan//

    --

    Nah seeing that i'm not so eager to run the streets witcha/
    Don't mean if u beefing i ain't gone be there shooting the street sweepa/

    So you either gone ride wit me or die quickly/
    No matter who u are dogg, i'm not picky//

    Then niggas want enemies and pick at me just cause i move in silence/
    But that don't mean ya'boi won't cause riots//

    And i'm tired of these niggas swearing that they gangsta bois/
    Cause i'll do a jail house rock, walk by and shank ya'boi/

    But i ain't no gutter ass nigga, no convict type nor juvenile/
    Too laid back for that/
    My calmness'll freak u out dogg, but thats just my style///

    So ya'll can call me Bnasty, yung poet, or just the next found unsigned artist/
    But i just want ya'll to feel me, i ain't in that contest wit' them wankstas trying to debate upon who is the hardest//

    --refrain--

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    Feed back please -bloody tears-

    feed back please

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    sup this wasnt great.....man
    sorry i feel this was ment to be an
    audio pice it kinda lack'd in a few
    things 1st structure was wack..
    and also no wordplay...the concepts
    were ok but you gotta set it
    as a proper om pice man...for real
    just peep others....nice try keep at it

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    yeah this was aight ... it seemed from your heart and to me thats what really counts ...........it wasnt that tech or even that complicated but you said what u had to say
    ******************peace***********************

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