1-2 Punch League
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@Galactic
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The mighty Gal. Prepare for annihilation chap.
Check, friend.
overdoses don't compare to the way you gettin smacked son
We all know gal lil bitch.. So it would be rewarding to shoot u in the face w/ that gun
My bad. Will be up shortly.
Scrawny Faggot. You have no chance, I'll beat you to death fam
You winning this battle is less likely than holding Ms P in a Kegstand
V/ gal
Freshs was pretty dope, galil is a sick gun, lil stretched tho. Gals shit was funny and clean wording
fresh- ga-lil not gal-lil, therefore comes off forced.
gal- i liked this bar, creative & original.
Vote- Gally
Dope concept, IMO - Wording hindered it. I think you could have worded this a lot better. For an example.Quote:
Originally Posted by fresh
This faggot'll do ANYTHING for a personal but search the forums & dig away,
We all know Gal lil ammo backfires & hopefully this time the bullet doesn't miss his face.
Something of that nature would have had more of an impact. Remember, try and tie in your set ups, a strong set up can make a mediocre punch dope, dude.
Wasn't really feelin' this at all, tbh. Corny, IMO and felt you could have came a a lot stronger and wittier which surprised that you didn't, bro. But, I'd have too say, this bar BARELY edges fresh's. If fresh would have worded his a tad bit better, he would have taken this EASILY!Quote:
Originally Posted by Galactic
v/Galactic
Don't sign out dude. This league will help you word and execute your concepts as well as get a feel of what the voters like to assist when you are writing verses for other leagues, bro.Quote:
Originally Posted by fresh
V/ galactic
lol i think fresh could of taken this if he switched his punch and worded it a lil better
he had a dope concept but galil is pronounced differently lil packed said
thats what made u lose
i wasnt a fan of gals punch at all tbh, but he executed it alright, he could of done more with it too
all in all fresh had the better concept but gal had the harder stinger due to wording
I think fresh clearly had the better concept but his wording was beyond terrible.. could have shortened it a bit more to keep the flow from running on like it did. Galactics punch was more like some lame slap stick comedy shit, didn't like him referencing mspush here when she has nothing to do with fresh or this battle.. felt like that made it a huge miss and though it was funny, it was indirect.
v/Fresh titties
Lol at gal. Fresh joint was Aight but came off forced to me.
Vote gal
vote Fresh
Gal dissed Push more than he did Fresh here lol smooth punch just very indirect. Fresh had a tight concept, wording could have been better, but being more direct gives him the edge.