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Lol, word.
@SiK ready to drop when you are...
^fuck you bro.. you fucked up my cypher drop with your wack ass line smh.. that shit was terrible too lmao.
Yea it was. I read that shit and it definitely inspired me to close out of the thread.
How come I'm not in? @Sik
did you no show last week? Im sure you did : )
its an autosign out if you did son. u mad?
Will the winner between me and king be in the contenders match next week?
lmao yall niggas must feel the same way Truth does. hahaha
no.. Im not wack, have no clue how he must feel.
Yea because of personal reasons out of my control. That's wack.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.
no point in keeping people who no show in for the next week bruhh, all you have to do is sign back in.. sik might even toss you in if he feels like it.
niggas nose got caught in the elevator going up to his apartment. he had to hit the emergency button whiched locked out the elevator so his nose would be decapitated while moving up/down the floors, yo.
this comment felt too wordy, the setup line was good and I feel you could have ended the punch about 40 words earlier, syllable count is way off, not sure if you were going for the longbar approach here but there are too many issues with the wording here. [1/5]Quote:
Originally Posted by Remark
I liked your concept here but felt like you killed the execution. It was definitely way too wordy and didn't have any type of harshness to help the concept deliver sharply.Quote:
Originally Posted by Wordz AhGod.