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Oh, I'll let you be you.
"Fake, Nutrider, Another person who is ruining rap?
Nah fuck that, Stop one in his tracks.
Rap is my life, and love, as it others.
We get pissed due to the fact of its fucks like you,
Who are just another god damn line of shit,
Not spitting anything real, Not spitting nothing but the kid before you.
No originality, Man you wanna be known as someone like that.
Well then go ahead. But Nigga I know that aint the way I wanna
Lay in my bed at night.
Re: NEW FREE (LET YALL KnOW IM STILL FUCKIN KING!!
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DJKingDavid
NO...thats not true bout me at all...i just wanna make em laugh...funny metaphors...dope wording...crazy ideas...shit just let me be me...n u depressed lil fags can be u...
I'll stop making fun of you.. when you stop staying stupid shit.
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u didnt even rhyme...GOT DAMMIT u guys really do just suck...i mean plz dont talk to me...u dont know shit bout me...
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May i ask? Who in the fuck was trying to rap?
And shit, You brought this on yourself.
So were giving what was asked for.
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lol then let all ur hate poor down...yall nothing but some lil fuckin kids...bitch get shot in tha face...go play in traffic...jump off a building...GO FUCKIN KILL URSELF!!!
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the way you section your sentences confused the dip shit....he thought you were droppin a little verse.lmao.
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im no kid im older than you its just fun fuckin with stupid guys on the internet who act gangster..lol
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Hahahaa, Great. Man, I had disrespect.
But I didn't realize your ass wore a helmet.
Man too the back of the buss.
Well Vic, Mind dropping in my Cannibal piece.
I dont know if you seen it or not.
But I'm going out with the lady .
Re: NEW FREE (LET YALL KnOW IM STILL FUCKIN KING!!
upped for even MORE HATE :)
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smh if yall dont like the fucking ryhme say what u got to say n be out, no reason in having 4 page arguements, take it for wtf it is leave ur piece n be out. i dont like trap music but i critique it in that genre. and i enjoy some of his audios
anyways
drop tops like a window shade bitch, flip flop, leather to suede shit
n my rims roll how i tell em too, like they on that replayed shit
yeah im real nice, high price, but i do persuade shit
that was nice
i call my guns stoves n pans, so dont get sauteed bitch
u better be afraid bitch, i got missiles aimed, with no delayed shit
i liked this
i think u overplay the shit word to much, but itd be better in audio
get at me me david
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THANX GOW...now thats a real dude...who knows bout how we do real shit...
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this was grimy as fuck IMO and like the poster above said the repetitive usage of "shit" made it what it was. we can definitely see what you were going for and it wasnt some super lyrical subliminal shit. the text was funny as hell and super witty, this is the kinda shit Id bump along with some gucci mane...
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i keep my guns real close, mayn they like my first aid kit
but truthfully, i rarely bust, cuz if they saw it, they'd shit
i call my guns stoves n pans, so dont get sauteed bitch
u better be afraid bitch, i got missiles aimed, with no delayed shit
all my life i prayed shit, finally got off my ass n made shit
n yeah GOD is good, but so are drugs, n i wanted to get paid shit
n fuck with some Beyonce hoes, so dude, i had to upgrade shit
fucking excellent lol
edit: u guys need to accept it for what it is
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You should drop this on audio mayne....edit it up a bit and it would be a dope sounding audio.....for what it was.. reading it was alright...but I can tell it had a trap style that would better be displayed vocally..reading the word and hearing the word are two different things..so...I can also see why people have an issue with the over-use of a couple of words....but it was alright man...lemme know if goes to audio...peace..
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yooo this is a sick freestyle i love the vibe in the beginning good job
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just expand your words yoo i felt like in the end you went back to the first verses