aight 10-15 lines
due in an hour or less(got class)
no hate votes
no d/r
no rtf votes.
good luck
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aight 10-15 lines
due in an hour or less(got class)
no hate votes
no d/r
no rtf votes.
good luck
thiz my check in... i'm bout to drop now, no feedin off my verse neither...
babygrl tori this should be a good match
u prolly aint from da bx u so called vocalist killa
from da way u spit yo mark azz prolly from da villa
dis dude think he can roll wt a group like g-unit n them
ha,yea wit da gorilla-unit hangin above da tree limb
u prolly a fat azz dude lookin like fat albert n bruce bruce
too busy eatin ho hos so u askin fa a truce
hey,hey,hey,get yo azz on da treadmill
no,no,no u dont need a fukin combo meal
but i do,ill fukin eat yo verse
unlike me, yo wack azz shyt u had ta rehearse
da only thang u rippin is a fukin condom wrappa
but even dat can rip betta den u,u a wannabe rappa
so when i get thru yo name wont even matta
now i strongly suggest u leave dis site
take yo rhymes n hang up ya fukin mic.
u prolly a fat azz dude lookin like fat albert n bruce bruce
too busy eatin ho hos so u askin fa a truce
hey,hey,hey,get yo azz on da treadmill
no,no,no u dont need a fukin combo meal
da only thang u rippin is a fukin condom wrappa
but even dat can rip betta den u,u a wannabe rappa
tori killed these lines good job gurl
- Peep my style...you should approach my art-with-a-caution,
- cuz Killa iz lethal, i'm rippin thiz 'Baby' apart-like-abortion/
- Talkin?? fuck that...i'll jus let these barz-hit-cha,
- cuz Tori ain't felt punchez thiz strong since she mix Kool-Aid with hard-liquor/
- Look shorty i kno ya secret...i'm see'in-wut-you-bout,
- rhyme'in ain't her hobby, she gotta spit to get that seman-out-her-mouth/
- Dahm!!! i can't believe-thiz-slut,
- you a ugly chik wit no titz...her bra size a Reeces-cup/
- WHAT!!! you a bitch-i-mean-thiz,
- plus to wack to take personal...so tha only way you gettin to my head iz if you grip-my-penis/
- Listen ma...Killa horny-for-sum-chik-luv,
- so stop wit tha weak lines...cuz my punches 'get around your barz' like Tori-at-a-strip-club/
babytori-your rhyme was okay, some good punches and personals, flow/structure was off in some places
killa-your ryhme was better, more elevated, stonger punches, flow/structure was also a little off in some places
v/v.killa for harder punches, more elevated rhyme
rtf honestly on my battles if you can :thumbup:
uppin for votes....^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
DaVocalist came alot harder with punches even though they didn't rhyme so well they still did the trick, Nice punches and personals...
...BabyTori why are you still on RB? You have been merked by everyone how can you still come back with all the embarrassment?
V/DaVocalist
hit this this: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=191019
i already kno i got thiz, Tori good effort.....yah can keep uppin if yah want, i can careless