10-20 lines as said,
no bullshit, check
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10-20 lines as said,
no bullshit, check
who cares where your from or who you even are
like a bear i'm maulin haulin your carcass leavin ya scar'd
you stay far away, too afraid to say you wanna_fight_me
under my knuckle have ya bucklin from left to_right_knee
saftey first, whats worst when our verse collides
yo head bursts from the impact and yo syntax can't survive
Abi sobbing, flopping with that sloppy face worthless
you shouldn't show it in this place,take that to a circus
if your lookin for work, somethin to pay ya dem clippins
you can work for me see, wash my clothes and wash dishes
Bosnian bitch, its not your will it is only yo wishes
quit talkin yo smack and get back in the kitchen
so listen right here if your troubled I don't give a fuck
cause your just the reflection off the sweat of my nuts
hahahaha that shit was weak
bored after the first line damn don't speak
your lucky this is the internet
and you don't have to go out in a crowd with that
in 14 lines i hope you have one good punch otherwise get the fuck back
i don't wanna burst yo bubble
but dr. zero u fucked with trouble
abi the real obg in the streets yo won't see me
cuz i'm the kingpin i'm everywhere but i'm still hiddin
dr. o comeon work on that flow
next time ill give you the up i'll be the first to go
i'll murder you now so next time yo'll be a no show
tell your bitch that's not my kid i didn't blow
this is different, votes would be somethin good to hit up.
Neither of these verses were very good. Dr.O had better flow than abi did but it was kinda stretched at times. Abi was very basic with flow and had some fucked up structure. Dr.O had better punches in his verse and a small presence of personals so he took that category. Vocab was ok. If anything Dr.O used more complex words. Nothing was really over the top on this battle. You both seemed to put little in2 it. Anyway... the winner was clear...
Vote - Dr.O
Neither of these verses were very good. Dr.O had better flow than abi did but it was kinda stretched at times. Abi was very basic with flow and had some fucked up structure. Dr.O had better punches in his verse and a small presence of personals so he took that category. Vocab was ok. If anything Dr.O used more complex words. Nothing was really over the top on this battle. You both seemed to put little in2 it. Anyway... the winner was clear...
i mean why waste my time
doing tha opener
core
closer
when both cats were whack
but any wayz
my vote/d.o
this was a whack battle so here it goes
on both parts both of the verse werent that nice
Dr.O came with better punches
and totally merked him
so thats who my vote goes to
my v. dr.o
if i vote on ur battles
return a vote on one of mine
pleaz
you both suck...simple rhymes on everyones part BUT Ali or what the fuck the out of towners name is had stronger rhymes (zero had shit that didnt rhyme) and well, just an overall better peice
V/abi
Stronger rhymes, better punches, fewer wach rhymes
you both sucked it up so you both have to get better
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Originally Posted by predkiller
didn't rhyme? your full of it
Yeah, pred.. word. You're trippin'. This is actually the best shit from you so far, Dr. O. You had some multis, flow, and some decent punches. Abi, what the fuck are you spittin' out?
abi the real obg in the streets yo won't see me
cuz i'm the kingpin i'm everywhere but i'm still hiddin
dr. o comeon work on that flow
next time ill give you the up i'll be the first to go
i'll murder you now so next time yo'll be a no show
tell your bitch that's not my kid i didn't blow
What the fuck? ^ Enough said. No punches in that.. at all.
Vote-Dr. O for better flow, multis, and punches.
Return the favor and hit up a link.
come on people vote please i want this to get closed too i want to battle other people but those stupid rules say i can't have more than 3 at a time or i love by DQ so vote please
*lose not love
uppin again............................................. .......................
who cares where your from or who you even are
like a bear i'm maulin haulin your carcass leavin ya scar'd
you stay far away, too afraid to say you wanna_fight_me
under my knuckle have ya bucklin from left to_right_knee
saftey first, whats worst when our verse collides
yo head bursts from the impact and yo syntax can't survive
Abi sobbing, flopping with that sloppy face worthless
you shouldn't show it in this place,take that to a circus
if your lookin for work, somethin to pay ya dem clippins
you can work for me see, wash my clothes and wash dishes
Bosnian bitch, its not your will it is only yo wishes
quit talkin yo smack and get back in the kitchen
so listen right here if your troubled I don't give a fuck
cause your just the reflection off the sweat of my nuts
- WOrk on structure and make sure that your spit flow both by word and by mouth...
hahahaha that shit was weak
bored after the first line damn don't speak
your lucky this is the internet
and you don't have to go out in a crowd with that
in 14 lines i hope you have one good punch otherwise get the fuck back
i don't wanna burst yo bubble
but dr. zero u fucked with trouble
abi the real obg in the streets yo won't see me
cuz i'm the kingpin i'm everywhere but i'm still hiddin
dr. o comeon work on that flow
next time ill give you the up i'll be the first to go
i'll murder you now so next time yo'll be a no show
tell your bitch that's not my kid i didn't blow
- Tooo Simplistic and weak....
My recomendations is to practice more freestylin, topicals, anything that will make you write more just because I dont think your fit for battelin... But dont despair just keep elevatin...
Vote = Dr.O
ok i understand i had nothing against him to write i have that problem too
my vote DR.O everybody already made it clear. no hate to Abi though