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Due 10days after set up
@Slayerr. @MV
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Due 10days after set up
@Slayerr. @MV
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Request ext until Sunday @mv @miracle
Is this The last season of 1-2?
Then they’ll find your body next season with growing weeds n vegetation
Yall were thinking resuscitation? at the end of a composite he’ll need reanimation
@Slayerr. on you mang..
Janurary has no burning lust, we’re all poor and wishing a dime but we never missed a step
We’re all back to work, but to earn a crust MV spends this time going down like the Christmas decs
closer battle than i expected, honestly. hard to judge.
MV’s creativity is always on brand in his punchlines. the weeds/vegetation segue into the reanimation punch using the term “composite” was fucking crazy. the layered meaning of a single word really carried the punch, cuz composite can refer to plants but also to an artistic rendering: thus, reanimating. dope.
Slayerrrrr had a very good showing here. the setup connected well with the punch’s execution & it was pretty funny & relevant since january is the get outta debt month. i liked the burning lust/earn a crust multi & the going down like decorations to make money is premium lulz.
this battle was hard to judge because i’m partial to current event references & both had those. i’m also partial to creative word usage & humor.. & both had that as well. both knew how to capitalize on the moment & deliver solid blows.
in the end i had to go with the more creative punch, which was MV’s, the execution of that double metaphor was hard to beat, but that doesn’t take away from Slayerrrr’s punch cuz that shit was slick & funny.
closest to a loss i’ve seen MV take since i been here so that says a lot.
vote: MV, but by a VERY slim margin.
good shit from both. def a great playoff match.
Then they’ll find your body next season with growing weeds n vegetation
Yall were thinking resuscitation? at the end of a composite he’ll need reanimation[/QUOTE]
I like the set up and ryhme scheme here, not a top ten line but it made sense and flowed well into the final bar, I didnt understand the composite part seems like its recycled from an old battle. but it was enough.
This was very very stretched & the set up didn't really match the finish.. lots of unnessessary words slowed the bar down immensely. Coulds have wrote it like this and won this battle:Quote:
Originally Posted by Slayerr.
"January has no burning lust, but we never missed a step
To earn a crust MV spends his time going down like Christmas decs"
Vote= Mv
better overall Bar, ryhme scheme, set up and finish worked together to make the line hit.
Good job Fellas!
this was ass gents. I hated every second of it. voting MV just cos it felt like he tried to do something with the words he was putting onto the post.