WK16: (1-0) DaveDILLY vs. (4-3) Art ART WINS

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@daveDILLY
@Art.

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by Art.

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i sent my lines 2 wux
good luck

Shits changed since u got locked up that night, I've been w/ your toddler & wife
I'm just trying to keep u Linkedin, since your bum ass never had a job in ur life

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Art.

Where in astoria were ya from , I’m cracking jokes like you were still there I lived there for a few years right off ditmars

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if we got locked you wud testify - spilling the beans to avoid a cell..
“judge hes right over there!!” - that’s Astoria bitchass like you would tell

I like Dave’s bar but that Astoria play is played. Been done on amen a bunch. Dope personal attempt but played to me. Art was fire! Cool play cool personal, good wording. Dope shit yall


Vote art.

Good showing from both here

I think this is Dave’s best bar since he’s back

Art’s personal I think hit harder. His setup to punch connection was worded harsher

v/ Art

yeah dave had a good bar even though astoria is played he wasnt around for it. wish there was something else to help tie in astoria / queens whatever so astoria made more sense. even a quote of some sort could have helped. it kinda just came out of nowhere even though it made sense within itself. if that makes sense.

Art had a dope personal worded super harsh.

Good battle

v/ Art.

I don’t think I’ve ever seen the Astoria wordplay done before tbh so it’s fresh to me at least, thought that was dope and worked well

LinkedIn was good too and given a personal twist which just edged me slightly more toward Art here

Vote - Art

I’m going against everyone in here… I thought Dave’s bar was hot lol.. def the best he’s dropped, arts was nice to but I thought Dave was pretty nice.. I never seen Astoria done before..

Vote: Dave

I've got Art here. I thought Astoria was slightly better wp
But the flip from the quote wasn't quite developed enough imo
Ccould've been dope though
LinkedIn tied in better w/ the setup

V Art

Art not bad but LinkedIn is a super old concept, wording and everything else was good but yeah. Dilly not much better but to your credit I’ve never seen an Astoria wordplay, nor have I ever recycled one. The punch was executed a bit more to my liking. Cool battle but I have dilly taking it.


Vote dildo

Cool battle here both came quite nice. I’ve never seen Astoria before either and thought it was nice. Arts linked in wasnt a great flip but it was worded nice and was very direct I was gonna vote dilly but as I’ve typed my vote out if changed my mind coz arts was a bit more direct and harsh

V/art

art wins 6-2