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Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@KnoXville. @Zunto
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http://rapbattles.com/forum/SOTW/SOT...W22-1-2(3).png
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@KnoXville. @Zunto
Your A Dead Man.
You never drop sharp enough voters are Bored of you bro.
I’ll inform your torso,
That the Cuts will bleed & leave Z all over fabric like the sword of zoro.
Knoxville wins by NS open for feed
lol it's cool, saying ur gonna leave him all over fabric isn't a gr8 punch but it's a funny concept
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Also is zunto ever gonna show for one of these or is he just trolling? sign that man out lmao
this was a good concept and a nice visual. and I like the rhyme pattern. i could have hit a bit harder but I fuck with it
Servicable jab, though I have two knocks on it. I would avoid single letter flips if possible, but also it was a bit wordy and that effected the flow & sting. That said, it works.