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Due in an hour.
Standard FL rules apply.
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You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
Damn, you comin soft I thought you did your thing, C
Yea he looks like a butterfly, but doesn’t sting like a bee
Im battling a homo, ill straight merk you cred
Dog your sick..
..so what makes you think you can handle a Vet?
Beatin him? Nah duke that was an easy task
Yea you can sip on henne..
..but you cant get your license to drive the car in the back
You wouldn’t elevate if you was doin nice wit the stock
Cred raped a little kid, now hes doin life in a box
GL i gotta be out so i posted quick
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
And dog you ain't no Eminem, there's no way you can sucker me
Refer to ya avy.. by the end of this verse you'll be needing some Recovery
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
Blast and it's on, thug? You don't move packs off the border
The last time you pushed weight, there was a baby in that stroller
Fag it's over, this was long path, but I proved you can't hurt me
I'm battling a Conquest? Bitch, this felt like a short ass journey
votes up
Conquest
You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
vs
Credential
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
Analysis
Con came too simple and lacked any serious punches. For example the vet/dawg line is just woeful cuz that shit has been played since battling began, as for the butterfly/ bee line it just came across as corny. Cred's punches hit harder & both his quotable's were better than Con's. The last bar could have been dope if it was worded better so I'ma say that's what you may need to work on but in all fairness that is most battlers downfall.
V/ Credential
You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
aight...
Damn, you comin soft I thought you did your thing, C
Yea he looks like a butterfly, but doesn’t sting like a bee
naw
Im battling a homo, ill straight merk you cred
Dog your sick..
..so what makes you think you can handle a Vet?
naw
Beatin him? Nah duke that was an easy task
Yea you can sip on henne..
..but you cant get your license to drive the car in the back
wasnt feelin it
You wouldn’t elevate if you was doin nice wit the stock
Cred raped a little kid, now hes doin life in a box
nah on the close...
VS
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
nice opener
And dog you ain't no Eminem, there's no way you can sucker me
Refer to ya avy.. by the end of this verse you'll be needing some Recovery
nice personal
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
cool nameplay
Blast and it's on, thug? You don't move packs off the border
The last time you pushed weight, there was a baby in that stroller
aight
Fag it's over, this was long path, but I proved you can't hurt me
I'm battling a Conquest? Bitch, this felt like a short ass journey
aight closer...
V/Credential
You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
aight...
Damn, you comin soft I thought you did your thing, C
Yea he looks like a butterfly, but doesn’t sting like a bee
naw
Im battling a homo, ill straight merk you cred
Dog your sick..
..so what makes you think you can handle a Vet?
naw
Beatin him? Nah duke that was an easy task
Yea you can sip on henne..
..but you cant get your license to drive the car in the back
wasnt feelin it
You wouldn’t elevate if you was doin nice wit the stock
Cred raped a little kid, now hes doin life in a box
nah on the close...
VS
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
nice opener
And dog you ain't no Eminem, there's no way you can sucker me
Refer to ya avy.. by the end of this verse you'll be needing some Recovery
nice personal
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
cool nameplay
Blast and it's on, thug? You don't move packs off the border
The last time you pushed weight, there was a baby in that stroller
aight
Fag it's over, this was long path, but I proved you can't hurt me
I'm battling a Conquest? Bitch, this felt like a short ass journey
aight closer...
V/Credential
You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
- nah
Damn, you comin soft I thought you did your thing, C
Yea he looks like a butterfly, but doesn’t sting like a bee
- hell no
Im battling a homo, ill straight merk you cred
Dog your sick..
..so what makes you think you can handle a Vet?
- wtf
Beatin him? Nah duke that was an easy task
Yea you can sip on henne..
..but you cant get your license to drive the car in the back
- lol is a no way
You wouldn’t elevate if you was doin nice wit the stock
Cred raped a little kid, now hes doin life in a box
- weak
VS
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
- meh ok ish but forced
And dog you ain't no Eminem, there's no way you can sucker me
Refer to ya avy.. by the end of this verse you'll be needing some Recovery
- ok
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
- meh
Blast and it's on, thug? You don't move packs off the border
The last time you pushed weight, there was a baby in that stroller
- ok
Fag it's over, this was long path, but I proved you can't hurt me
I'm battling a Conquest? Bitch, this felt like a short ass journey
- ok ish
Overall - Con came too simple, structure and shits good just no witty content, just straight forward type punches. Cred had a few more descent lines, the rest were on the ok level. Just one sided imo. v - Cred
Thanks. Up there.
You’re a bum dawg and im something presidential
Merkin him was a conquest…. Now your one of MY credentials
^weak play
Damn, you comin soft I thought you did your thing, C
Yea he looks like a butterfly, but doesn’t sting like a bee
^this wasnt good
Im battling a homo, ill straight merk you cred
Dog your sick..
..so what makes you think you can handle a Vet?
^a played concept but decent
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Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
^ coo nameplay
And dog you ain't no Eminem, there's no way you can sucker me
Refer to ya avy.. by the end of this verse you'll be needing some Recovery
^weak ava play
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
^iight
Punches: cred
Flow: con
Personals: cred
Wordplay: cred
Originality: cred
Enjoyment: cred
Vote: cred
one sided
nothing
vs
Look bitch you're not smart or witty with these raps, so stop son
You'd think he's wrapped around a dick, how we all know Con dumb
But luckily, I'm the man behind the plan, like I crafted it on
And you'd think I scammed people daily, how I mastered this Con
Fag it's over, this was long path, but I proved you can't hurt me
I'm battling a Conquest? Bitch, this felt like a short ass journey
lmao cred took this easily conquest your verse was mad simple dawg and you had like no really good punches, i actually enjoyed reading creds verse some original nice lines i even chuckled a bit
v/ cred