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i cant post till tomorrow morning sorry
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
aight damn
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no effort.
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
hes not a gangster -hes just crappy..
cuz the only time he sprays blood is his mother fucking ava/
**(he spelt his name wrong in the title..Pagne)
very nice
im gonna vote for miracle,much better punches and a flow that was easy to follow.jim was aight,need to work on flow and structure.I thought that you were headed in the right direction with punches,but the rhymes are what make them connect.Also tighten up that flow.
v=mir
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
lol i like this, not bad..
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
lol owned him on that one.. like the creativity, fresh.
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
could have been a bit more harsh.. ok at best
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
another fresh one.. like the creativity.
vs
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
ok at best
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
ok personal, should have hit harder.. the set up ok, punch failed
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
okish
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
lol fresh shit here buddy
J got this battle with fresher concepts, harder punches, and consistency.. M, you under estimated him it seems.. or u just half assed it lazy.
you can't drop that slick shit, cuz it's hard after i rapture your bowels
he claims to be the sickest rapper that spits...but he's really the sickest rapper that swallows
lol alright
learn how to throw in the towel, but don't act like it's a boxin match
ask the tootsie pop owl, how many licks does he have to take...to put out an awesome rap?
lol good
cockin' back, and aimin' at whats under your stocking cap, i wont even read your phony post
you'll need a miracle to beat me...from the father, the son AND the holy ghost
nice
this homies toast, Jimmy will spank you then thank you for taking defeat
I'll get a standing ovation, and on your behalf.....beg the crowd to stay in their seats
nah..
cause it's over before it even began, like you and your girl..and i'm tired of hearin her shit
me an her had a sandwhich but used mayo...she told me you would stick with her though cuz Miracle's Whipped
nah...
vs
dont matter if u come out on top..ill stay storming your lines..
cause 'either way ,you suck , man' - like two fags performing 69's/
lol alright
Jp's nothing, people quick to forget after reading this lame..
so being known?- even this fuck had trouble saying his name/ *
haha nice
u'll never see him make it- reason being he never had skill..
so rising to the top? ill stop payne like the purpose of advil/
ok, pretty good
this guys whack....im sure being garbage wasnt in ya plans..
but everything about u..... blew J, like hardcore toronto fans/
meh, I saw the concept but the punch wasn't good
hes not a gangster -hes just crappy..
cuz the only time he sprays blood is his mother fucking ava/
nope
Both started off hard but fizzled out towards the end, but I'll give it to miracle.
2-1 uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89/index2.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...496/index.html
left comments on these but can't vote cuz im a newbie lol