No Introduction Needed.

I'm a rapper in training trying to perfect my craft so any feed is welcome, whether it's negative or love it's all good, I just wanna get better...

I stopped listenin to instrumentals because I flow different
It's funny, I'm a black kid with no rhythm
Tryin my hardest just to fit in or even get in
But they know Isaiah's different
Went as far as callin me gifted, It's sickenin-
Instead of takin the praise, I chose to hide my face like Wilson
It's either I'm ashamed or I'm smitten
I don't think that I'm against them
I just prefer talkin with this black pen
15 seconds of fame? Nah I'm destined for at least a few hours
No question
And If you got one, send it my way
I'll definitely answer back like Cashusking or Mickey Factz
But we'll really chat on wax in a rap one day
Below The Heavens still stuck on play
Finally someone made shit to relate
And if you did...my mistake, it's all love no hate I'm just car cruisin
Starin at these aliens slash mutants
Guess nobodies really human
Until I saw me, Isaiah Thomas the new fusion
Peace.

haha
I fed these 2 drops and more, but go check out all the ones I fed so far too their all dope!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ce-388427.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...er-388406.html

Lol @ that opener

word tho, i like this shit, not quite sure why... got you all over it tho, like the way its wrote got a unique-ness to it,
tha structure looking mad fucked up, but it dont flow too bad,
pretty decent lyricly too,

stay up man, decent drop

Went as far as callin me gifted, It's sickenin-
Instead of takin the praise, I chose to hide my face like Wilson


^^ please scrap that shit tho

thanks for the feed man

lol and I liked that Wilson line =[, I'll try to improve lyrically next time, but thanks again for the feed and i re-did yours.
Any other feed is welcome.

Feed Me!! haha

Bump

wow nothing?

I know these boards are kinda dead... :thumbsdow
but they're better than the other ones I was on....

You got the right idea man, you def know what this shit is about, you just gotta elevate a little. I personally can't write to a beat, I hear the beat, try to write and it just fucks me up, so I know how you feel. At least you understand the basic concept of writing rhymes, which a lot of people don't. Try to make all of your lines have the same amount of syllables, or just make em as close as you possibly can. You'll get better, just keep writing man. This was mediocre, but not bad. stay up

nah we just dont feed things that are not interesting to our taste but this here was a nice concept and the idea was a nice attempt nah mean. liked your delivery i just feel it needs a bit more work and your lyrics hella lot of work needed man. lmfao but word this be the place to learn homie.

yay feed back thanks, i'll work on it... i'm satisfied now haha