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since u left
only had bout 7 min to make this up kinda like a extended freestyle so dont think this is my best work
never had nobody like u who wants me
ya skin ya eyes ya touch it haunts me
wasnt sure how to love till i met u
i wish i had money so anythin u wanted i could get u
im sorry i lost it sorry bout the fight
i just cant go on wit out u in my life
when im not wit u i feel stress
wit out u i feel like i got nothin left
its so hypnotizin the way u move
when i earnd that 20 dollers i let u choose
anythin u wanted but sadly had to give u a price range
when im wit u i get this feelin call it strange
when u left i only felt pain
wit out u girl my life aint the same
now its like im travelin down one dark pit
life wit out u courtney it aint worth shit
i didnt mean to call u a bitch didnt mean to offend
i wonder could u ever love me again
u truly were my one and only
my boys got my bak but im still feelin so lonley
do u remember the way i used to hold u in the night
bangers outside the door but i made sure it was goin be alright
i wish u could love me again but it seems our realtionship is thru
so now im here rappin reminissin on u
if i could i would by u the world
cant stop thinkin how much i love this girl
and no one could replace u, the things u shown to me
so courtney im beggin u come home to me
i love u....
remember didnt have a lot of time fo this one
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strucutre was off and same with flow..but rhymes were good
this was an aiight drop...elevate on complexitt
same with vocab...you got potential.....
keep droppin and keep elevating
vocab was too simple but like i said..
rhymes were good..impressed with that
overall this was like an ok...peace
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