LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data PLETH WINS
@Encrypted Data
@plethora
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Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Check. Down for 14. Let me know.
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Let’s get it
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Good stuff. That LED line made me laugh. Strong ending.
Let’s get some votes here!
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
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Originally Posted by
Encrypted Data
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
Minus the expo, this was actually good. Kind of corny and a stretch bc pleth ain't shit, but creativity gets the nod here
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Olllllld wordplay and not enough of a flip to make it hit. Miss
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
Hell no. If it wasn't bad enough, calling him P to make the nameplay
was
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
Whack
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Nah man
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Hah, dope. More of this and your opener please
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
Filler
Quote:
Originally Posted by
plethora
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
Dece
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
No. Simple af
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
Dope
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
I like this different approach. Kudos
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
Lol hit
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
Nah, this was a stretch/try hard concept
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Dece
Mvgt Plethora
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data
Quote:
Originally Posted by
Encrypted Data
Let’s get it
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
Longwinded and choppy. Ok ish
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Old/no sting
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
Dont like at all
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
Nooo man
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Nah
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Ok
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
Nothing here
Quote:
Originally Posted by
plethora
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
Nah bro old n easy
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
Ok
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
Dope
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
Ok
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
Dope
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
Nah
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Cool
Got pleth. Other guys new i imagine. Cool read bros
Pleth
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
First line is a stretch. Second line has creativity but the wording is meh.
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
Another stretch. Simply changing out 'you dont get it' with 'but' improves the line. I see what you were going for with your arrest/no authority concept but ehhh
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
I'm a fan of revisiting a concept as long as both punches are good enough to stand alone. But the underlined is lazy as fuck. This was kinda funny and, if you reworded some shit, would've hit
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
Wtf
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
These 2 bars flow so much better than the rest that I'd think someone else wrote it. The punch in the first bar is more like a set up.
Aside from the last two bars, the wording is way too stretched. While you had some ok concepts, even great concepts cannot overcome poor wording. The fake Prince line was the best out of the bunch if I had to pick. You stuck with him being gay for a while there AND as your closer. Gotta be more creative. Also, the people voting on these battles should be able to pick up on wordplay without the need for you to explain shit in parentheses. This aint the FL
4/10
VS
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
avg filler
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
bad filler
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
decent wordplay, coulda rhymed better but ok bar overall
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
I was rockin wit it till the second line. Didn't hit
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
Aight
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
Ehhh
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
Ok closer.
I got it about half and half between decent and subpar lines. More than enough to take this one.
6.5/10
Vote: Plethora
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW
Encrypted ur shit was better this week then the week before.. Wordplay was a bit outdated tho..and u need to work on setting up your bars..use less words.. Your bar are a little to stretched.. U def had better attempt than last week. U def got outshied in this battle tho..pleth was alot stronger and had better setups... Wasnt to good of a verse but def enough for the win.. Encry keep reading/voting on battles and see what the people want..how the bars are set up n delivered..keep at it tho..ull be get down.. Ur last bars were how they should all be worded..just get more creative
VOTE PLETH
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW
This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
ok so first off this is long winded as fuck. second, if the bar is written properly you shouldn't have to explain the wordplay (actually here you would have been fine without explaining because i got it without the expo). not a fan of this bar as is, though it did have potential
Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
too simple. not a fan
Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
didn't like this
I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
hmm ok ill give a jab for this
This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
not a fan
Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
your shortening them up now but its not hittnig for me
Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
not a fan
vs
this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
this is absolute trash lmfaooo. played concept though ive seen these type of fresh bars used a few times.
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light
that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
cool
run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
diggin it
bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
lmao dope
talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
nah
get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
ok
this was pretty one sided. plethora a bitch for trash talking me but he gets the win here
v/ pleth
Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW
milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light
Don’t curve the grades for me. If anything judge me more harshly. I won’t improve that way.
Good win Pleth.
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